Holocaust
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Comment from Dave M
Curt,
This is an excellent poem, and I think the internal rhyme is just perfect for it. I don't know why that idiot gave you such a low rating, but such things happen on Fanstory. Keep on truckin'!
Dave M
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Curt,
This is an excellent poem, and I think the internal rhyme is just perfect for it. I don't know why that idiot gave you such a low rating, but such things happen on Fanstory. Keep on truckin'!
Dave M
Comment Written 10-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Thank you for your kind rating. The fellow did not like the content of the message. It was too disturbing for him. That tells me I did it right. The rating is of no relevance in this instance, for his words told me what I wanted to hear.
Thanks again,
Curt
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hello Curt! I decided on "just one more" before going off to bed...I'm so glad I found this moving and excellent poem. The rhyme scheme made the power of your words even stronger and each line flowed into the next.
Sometimes, we write guided by something or someone unseen but a part of us. Thanks for sharing this work with us.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Hello Curt! I decided on "just one more" before going off to bed...I'm so glad I found this moving and excellent poem. The rhyme scheme made the power of your words even stronger and each line flowed into the next.
Sometimes, we write guided by something or someone unseen but a part of us. Thanks for sharing this work with us.
Smiles,
Indy :>)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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I'm glad you stopped off and had one more for the road! Your comments and rating made my day, so thank you for stopping by!
Curt
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Sometimes, Curt, when something needs to be written, it happens through our pen, regardless of whether or not we know why, or where it came from. This has an excellent and interesting poem that has great rhyme scheme, with the internal rhyme adding still more to it. Your content, of course is difficult, but worthy, and cannot be said enough about in written or spoken word. Love the art.
Pea
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Sometimes, Curt, when something needs to be written, it happens through our pen, regardless of whether or not we know why, or where it came from. This has an excellent and interesting poem that has great rhyme scheme, with the internal rhyme adding still more to it. Your content, of course is difficult, but worthy, and cannot be said enough about in written or spoken word. Love the art.
Pea
Comment Written 10-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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My mother was a child in Germany during WW2. She was also half Jewish, and had to hide, starving, while Nazi soldiers searched for them constantly. Her strength helped forge my will. Maybe it was her way of telling me she is still with me.
Thanks for the wonderful comments and for the rerview. I do appreciate it very much.
Sincerely,
Curt
Comment from eye4hire
I thought this was an excellent poem. Sorry about the newbie 2. They don't know. You have a gift for words, he was right about that!
Eye4hire
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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I thought this was an excellent poem. Sorry about the newbie 2. They don't know. You have a gift for words, he was right about that!
Eye4hire
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Curt
Comment from Earthwriter
Interesting rhyming schem, but i found the content disturbing and non enjoyable you have a gift with words buti thing you are sacrificing cntent to rhyme. It seems to jumble your meaning and clutters the scope of what you are writing
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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Interesting rhyming schem, but i found the content disturbing and non enjoyable you have a gift with words buti thing you are sacrificing cntent to rhyme. It seems to jumble your meaning and clutters the scope of what you are writing
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2008
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I'm not sure what you mean by this piece being confusing, as your review was ambiguous about that.
If this piece disturbed you, then I did my job right. Not all poetry is wishy-washy love dripping with sentiment. If it made you uncomfortable, that is high praise for me.
Thanks for your opinion,
Curt
