Renewal
Free Verse; As the New Year dawns. . .116 total reviews
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Diane,
There is GREAT truth in what you speak here; traumatic experiences tend to predispose brain physiology to "more of the same." :-/
BUT - one CAN transcend this perspective and actually form NEW neural pathways! :))
Great write - lovely presentation - no edits needed here! :)
Thanks for sharing!
WRITE ON,
Jan
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Hi Diane,
There is GREAT truth in what you speak here; traumatic experiences tend to predispose brain physiology to "more of the same." :-/
BUT - one CAN transcend this perspective and actually form NEW neural pathways! :))
Great write - lovely presentation - no edits needed here! :)
Thanks for sharing!
WRITE ON,
Jan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from kintesiegel
I love your voice and wisdom and the ferocity and courage with which you face the day. Happy new year to you to. So glad to see such wonderful writing.
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I love your voice and wisdom and the ferocity and courage with which you face the day. Happy new year to you to. So glad to see such wonderful writing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from Thayamax
Such a wonderful New Year message. Don't live in the past and dwell on your mistakes; pick yourself up, dust yourself off and go out there and do it differently.
Insanity is doing the same thing and expecting different results.
Well written verse with an uplifting message.
Thaya
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Such a wonderful New Year message. Don't live in the past and dwell on your mistakes; pick yourself up, dust yourself off and go out there and do it differently.
Insanity is doing the same thing and expecting different results.
Well written verse with an uplifting message.
Thaya
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from FredCollingwood
Only a fool would stay
Imprisoned by the past
Only a fool would fear
What this day brings
Only a fool would miss
This opportunity to renew
Such good advice. I hope a lot of people read it.
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Only a fool would stay
Imprisoned by the past
Only a fool would fear
What this day brings
Only a fool would miss
This opportunity to renew
Such good advice. I hope a lot of people read it.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from Juleeann
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. Once again, you poets amaze me. You say so much in so few words. This was meaningful, beautiful and well written. This does really say it all--another chance. Thanks for sharing.
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B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L. Once again, you poets amaze me. You say so much in so few words. This was meaningful, beautiful and well written. This does really say it all--another chance. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from Lady & Louis
Happy New Year, Mrs KT!
This is the first of your poems I've read this year, and it's perfect - not only in form but in timing of the content, for me; it's exactly what I needed to hear in a New Year that has gone rather "blah". This is a gentle reminder to all, and so well put. I particularly like the development of Words, Paths and Hopes, like a shifting refrain, and, as ever, your lucid, laconic free verse, which says so much so simply.
Bravo!
LL :)))
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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Happy New Year, Mrs KT!
This is the first of your poems I've read this year, and it's perfect - not only in form but in timing of the content, for me; it's exactly what I needed to hear in a New Year that has gone rather "blah". This is a gentle reminder to all, and so well put. I particularly like the development of Words, Paths and Hopes, like a shifting refrain, and, as ever, your lucid, laconic free verse, which says so much so simply.
Bravo!
LL :)))
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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Happy New Year Dear Friend! How pleased I am to hear from you and to know that you truly enjoyed my offering. Thank you so much for the marvelous review! Every day is a new beginning....yes? I sometimes forget...I was struck by your writing that my writig "says so much so simply." If you only knew how hard I have tried to achieve that element!!!!! Ah...maybe someday over tea and scones we will be able to share. Best Wish in 2008; I do believe it is going to be a year filled will amazing moments of laughter and love...diane
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My pleasure, Diane!
I can well imagine the work that went into refining this piece - your work is always so beautifully clear, one could almost say pared-down, but that doesn't describe its elegance.
Tea and scones, yum... though you don't want to see me with jam and cream, too horrid a sight my dear, too horrid!
Louise :D
Comment from FrankieT
Mrs. KT, this was extremely well told/written/composed and made so much sense. It also read well. Feliz ano nuevo para ti. :0)
FrankieT
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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Mrs. KT, this was extremely well told/written/composed and made so much sense. It also read well. Feliz ano nuevo para ti. :0)
FrankieT
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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Hppy New Year Frankie! So pleased you enjoyed! Thank you so muich for the wonderful review. And I do hope that ths new year is filled with infinite possibilities for you and yours....diane
Comment from margyl
And a very Happy New Year to you, Mrs. KT. You have written a very uplifting and encouraging poem. Just beautiful and the artwork is complimentary. Congratulations on this beautiful poem.
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And a very Happy New Year to you, Mrs. KT. You have written a very uplifting and encouraging poem. Just beautiful and the artwork is complimentary. Congratulations on this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
Comment from KalleeMerra
I'm sitting here after a draining day, long telephone conversations with people who are uncooperative and I see diane has posted something called "Renewal". I open it, hoping for humor or perhaps a modicum of inspiration and find out that I'm a fool! what a surprise that was!
Thanks, I needed that!
edward
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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I'm sitting here after a draining day, long telephone conversations with people who are uncooperative and I see diane has posted something called "Renewal". I open it, hoping for humor or perhaps a modicum of inspiration and find out that I'm a fool! what a surprise that was!
Thanks, I needed that!
edward
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2008
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Oh....edward! No! You just have to look the New Year in its face and know that good things are right around the corner!!! Humor next time....maybe :>) diane
Comment from Lois Delaney
A lovely poem. The things I like about it is that the lines are set up differently, and that the final lines I can relate to. I pray on bended knee that I am not a fool, as well. Nice poem.
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A lovely poem. The things I like about it is that the lines are set up differently, and that the final lines I can relate to. I pray on bended knee that I am not a fool, as well. Nice poem.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2008
