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free flowing free verse34 total reviews
Comment from daisyfly
Such an awesome way to express what writing can be like, can feel like. No wonder people are liking this one. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2007
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Such an awesome way to express what writing can be like, can feel like. No wonder people are liking this one. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2007
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thanx!! :-)
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Shellei. This is a lovely piece of sensual poetry in which you have used some awesome imagery to arouse the senses very effectively. Well done
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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Hi Shellei. This is a lovely piece of sensual poetry in which you have used some awesome imagery to arouse the senses very effectively. Well done
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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thanx!!!!!!!!!! :-)
Comment from gucci
It is rare to come across such superior writing, the strength of this poem is breathtaking. I was moved from start to finish. The flow, the presentation . . . profound and exquisite. It is in a class of its own! Just wonderful, I loved it all. Thank you for sharing this touching write - gucci
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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It is rare to come across such superior writing, the strength of this poem is breathtaking. I was moved from start to finish. The flow, the presentation . . . profound and exquisite. It is in a class of its own! Just wonderful, I loved it all. Thank you for sharing this touching write - gucci
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is my SIXTH sixer on this piece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
omg!!!!!! thank you thank you :-D
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Comment from Kingsland
even though I don't care for the way you format this piece of poetry
the words in this piece outweigh the distraction of the formatting
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written verse... John
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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even though I don't care for the way you format this piece of poetry
the words in this piece outweigh the distraction of the formatting
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written verse... John
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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LOL! thanx lots! :-)
Comment from penfold18
What do I like about this"everything" not just the flow which is almost tangible but the effortlessness of it, the words themselves have a beat a sensuous rhythm of their own , this has indeed been a pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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What do I like about this"everything" not just the flow which is almost tangible but the effortlessness of it, the words themselves have a beat a sensuous rhythm of their own , this has indeed been a pleasure to read.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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COOL!! thank YOU soo much! :-)
Comment from Jer4Clarity
Shellei,
This poem is one of your better ones. I liked the romantic flair and they way you used your pen..no pun intended to bring us into this love affair...It truly felt sensual to me...for a second I thought you were writing it to me. heheh
~(;) Jer4Clarity
Creator of the Clarity Pyramid
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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Shellei,
This poem is one of your better ones. I liked the romantic flair and they way you used your pen..no pun intended to bring us into this love affair...It truly felt sensual to me...for a second I thought you were writing it to me. heheh
~(;) Jer4Clarity
Creator of the Clarity Pyramid
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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hahaha thanx lots for sliding by :-)
Comment from mmichelle97219
A well written piece that moves the soul is an orgasm from the writer. A very good piece today, shellei. I liked it.
Michelle
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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A well written piece that moves the soul is an orgasm from the writer. A very good piece today, shellei. I liked it.
Michelle
Comment Written 27-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2007
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hehe thanx lots!!!!!!!!
guess what!
i've gotten SIX sixers on this one piece!!!!!!!!
this is so exciting lol :-D
Comment from GENTLE STORM
Now I know I have my mind in the gutter cuz I was thinkin something else entirely. This was good, my friend. The flow, the imagination, everything was good about this poem. Its been awhile and you are growing as a poetess. Cheers. zack
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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Now I know I have my mind in the gutter cuz I was thinkin something else entirely. This was good, my friend. The flow, the imagination, everything was good about this poem. Its been awhile and you are growing as a poetess. Cheers. zack
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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hmm i wonder what you were thinking lol
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
That was a very beautiful enty into your book shells. It was deep and poignant and did an excellent job of expressing what writing, what words mean you and others.
pea
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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That was a very beautiful enty into your book shells. It was deep and poignant and did an excellent job of expressing what writing, what words mean you and others.
pea
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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hehe thanx!! :-)
Comment from dip-a-dee-do
Wow!
This is such well written and you are so very talented..
I love your presentation and artwork.. Just perfect..
The flow is great!
No typos I can find....
No problems I can see.....
Great write..
Donna
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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Wow!
This is such well written and you are so very talented..
I love your presentation and artwork.. Just perfect..
The flow is great!
No typos I can find....
No problems I can see.....
Great write..
Donna
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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cool! thanx!! :-)
