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free flowing free verse34 total reviews
Comment from Lulu22
This is such a sensual and unique poem and an enjoyable read.
'words slide sensuously over the smooth naked page' So many lines that say
one thing but imply other things. Well, I wish my reviewing was better but
I did my best. Great poem. What more can I say. A very good poem!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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This is such a sensual and unique poem and an enjoyable read.
'words slide sensuously over the smooth naked page' So many lines that say
one thing but imply other things. Well, I wish my reviewing was better but
I did my best. Great poem. What more can I say. A very good poem!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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ehhehehe glad ya liked it :-)
Comment from TurningFlame
I can't believe I've missed these poems -- they're stunning! Style, content, form -- stunning.
Sign me up. I may not drop in a bunch of adoring comments, but I will be reading from this group of poems every day for a while. Walking along the creek by Sutter's Mill, suddenly I see sparkles in the gravel!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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I can't believe I've missed these poems -- they're stunning! Style, content, form -- stunning.
Sign me up. I may not drop in a bunch of adoring comments, but I will be reading from this group of poems every day for a while. Walking along the creek by Sutter's Mill, suddenly I see sparkles in the gravel!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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COOL!!
thank you sooo much - and thanx for the awesome sixer too!! :-D
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When I see a spark of genius, it gets a six if I've got one to give, whether the poem is "perfect" or not. In this case it is, to my eye at least.
Comment from sngldad4gd
Yes, Yes, Yes, more, more ,more. HMMM! I wrote one like this today as well, must be a bug in the air,LOL. I see many people are returning home to find , no home. It is sad all the memories that are lost forever as they show the people trying to find a picture, a wedding ring, a little hope. Ray
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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Yes, Yes, Yes, more, more ,more. HMMM! I wrote one like this today as well, must be a bug in the air,LOL. I see many people are returning home to find , no home. It is sad all the memories that are lost forever as they show the people trying to find a picture, a wedding ring, a little hope. Ray
Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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yea, it's sad....
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omg omg omg
guess what
well guess!
okay fine be that way
i'll just tell you
i have gotten THREE SIXERS on this ONE post!!!!!!!!!!
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Way to go my friend. Amazing how one can inspire another to greatness. :>)
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! i am in total utter totally excited shock!!!!!!! i have gotten FIVE sixers on this now!!!!!!!!!!!!! FIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wowsers! :-P :-) :-D
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LOL, You're welcome for the inspiration. LMAO, mine didnt even make it to the front page
Comment from jeana
I liked your poem It is an unusual combination passion and writing. The images abound throughoput the passages, intimate and personal. I enjoyed your read. jeana
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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I liked your poem It is an unusual combination passion and writing. The images abound throughoput the passages, intimate and personal. I enjoyed your read. jeana
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007
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hehe thanx!! :-)
