Comment from signingsis

Exceptional

aha! I can see why it is popular.
Very well written and oh so creative.
The imagery is amazing.
The flow is smooth.
The words have been chosen well.
What's not to love! :)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my FOURTH SIXER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU :-D :-D

Comment from schiestyboy

Excellent

Very good! So much can be done with the right combination of words, and you've illustrated that quite nicely in this piece. Thanks for sharing :)

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

thanks for reading! :-)

Comment from Martie

Excellent

Hi Shellei

What a sensual pen you have....where did you get it? :) I also like the form that you used and the alliteration....

words slide sensuously
over the smooth naked page
resting silently waiting
delving into life

Nicely done!

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

walmart LOL!

reply by Martie on 27-Oct-2007

LOL Hmmmm, maybe I shouldn't have avoided going there...I had no idea! :)

Comment from experimentalpoet

Excellent

words
seduce you
taking your soul
on a sensuous vacation
of quiet emotions


It is absolutely and completely understandable that people are really liking this...it is awesome...poetic perfection....You are gifted, unique and passionate...thank you for sharing..take care Brenda

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

thank YOUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi shellei, Oh once you get your pen in your hand, your thoughts just seem to flow out with ease.. How did you ever think of these lines--

hold the pen
tightly
slowly moving
quicker
across the page
with kisses
of a private soul
publicly writing
for all to listen
in silence

Gert

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

not really sure - just what 'came' to me (no pun intended LOL)

reply by Gert sherwood on 27-Oct-2007

Hi sheelei, well keep those quick thoughts coming

I like them
see you around
Love
Gert

Comment from Red Heart

Excellent

A sensual and seductive penning of words
in this metaphoric piece of written subdued emotions.
Very nicely seduced.

Red Heart

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

hehe thanx! :-)

Comment from duckylamour

Excellent

This is outstanding and this of all your recent poems deserves a six rating. I love the line, the smooth naked page. (I never thought of that, but it works for me!) Unfortunately the first of the month isn't here yet, so this will have to be a highly appreciative five stars.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

ever thought of it til today either LOL!

Comment from slowriter

Excellent

You have a unique and creative way of putting things that is so enjoyable to read.

I am intrigued... and know I will read more of your chapters.

Thanks for sharing your writing. You have a gift.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

cool! thank you so much :-D

Comment from malachi1206

Excellent

Quite a write I liked it you have a unique viewpoint on your approach to writing and as a person with a passion for writing I find it particularly refreshing malachi1206

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

wow thank you! :-)

Comment from PuppetMaster1337

Exceptional

I love the way you write this poem. The reader definitely feels the passion and the word choice does an excellent job to set the mood of the poem. The flow works perfectly and conveys your thoughts extremely well. You full mastery of the English language and it shows in this piece. Don't change a thing, it's perfect the way it is! -PM

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2007

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D
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