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Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "fading sparkles"I dare you....
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Comment from Jer4Clarity
Once again another great poem from you my friend. I love the way you place your words down the page and help the reader to read these out loud.
~(;) Jer4Clarity
Creator of the Clarity Pyramid
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2007
Once again another great poem from you my friend. I love the way you place your words down the page and help the reader to read these out loud.
~(;) Jer4Clarity
Creator of the Clarity Pyramid
Comment Written 17-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2007
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hehe thanx lots! :-)
Comment from sngldad4gd
Uhm, I could come up with a comical poem to these words but I won't hahahahahaha, with words like "Tinkling" and "flood" and , hahahahahaha. You did a wonderful job my friend. Geez quit laughing, you're gonna fall out of your chair, hahahaha. Ray :>)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
Uhm, I could come up with a comical poem to these words but I won't hahahahahaha, with words like "Tinkling" and "flood" and , hahahahahaha. You did a wonderful job my friend. Geez quit laughing, you're gonna fall out of your chair, hahahaha. Ray :>)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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couch lol - and i dare you to write that 'comical poem' hehehehe ;-)
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Hahahahahahaha, naw some might get offended by "cute tinkling sounds compared to mens floods" Hahahahahahahaha. OMG! I need seat belts for my chair, hahahaha
Comment from mmichelle97219
I haven't sent you one lately. I will have to correct that. Now let me see if I can meet this one. I thought your answer was clever and colorful. Good post.
Michelle
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
I haven't sent you one lately. I will have to correct that. Now let me see if I can meet this one. I thought your answer was clever and colorful. Good post.
Michelle
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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lol
thanx lots :-)
Comment from duckylamour
This is reflects the emotions that so many feel remembering. Emotions are in color and you described this very well. Reading this brings out emotions and usually we don't think of them in color but they are. This is excellent.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
This is reflects the emotions that so many feel remembering. Emotions are in color and you described this very well. Reading this brings out emotions and usually we don't think of them in color but they are. This is excellent.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx!! :-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi shellei, Oh you have shown us a lady who memories that once were full of wonderful and colorful things in life, --are now fading away..
Loved it shellei.
gert
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
Hi shellei, Oh you have shown us a lady who memories that once were full of wonderful and colorful things in life, --are now fading away..
Loved it shellei.
gert
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx much! :-)
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Hi shellei, I hope you saw the well deserved ((six. stars) You really impressed me with your thoughts.
Gert
Comment from steevie
Excellent Very thought provoking verses and the transition from one line to the next is flawless! Congrats on this wonderful piece. Steevie
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
Excellent Very thought provoking verses and the transition from one line to the next is flawless! Congrats on this wonderful piece. Steevie
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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cool! thanx! :-)
Comment from KiaKai Isles
Hey Shellei Kae.
Honey I am not sure I haven't already reviewed this. It just seems familiar, Oh well
I think emotions all play out like swearling colours, Good and bad, This came across very well in your poem
I liked the pace of this and I thought it flowed together well
Travis x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
Hey Shellei Kae.
Honey I am not sure I haven't already reviewed this. It just seems familiar, Oh well
I think emotions all play out like swearling colours, Good and bad, This came across very well in your poem
I liked the pace of this and I thought it flowed together well
Travis x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx lots :-)
Comment from experimentalpoet
thank you so much - this is really a very vivid piece of poetry - rich with imagery and your words bring life to the picture you use to illustrate the piece.....I very much enjoyed reading it - it is well written and perfect....take care ep
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
thank you so much - this is really a very vivid piece of poetry - rich with imagery and your words bring life to the picture you use to illustrate the piece.....I very much enjoyed reading it - it is well written and perfect....take care ep
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx so much :-)
Comment from ransomme
Really nice shelli kaye, I thank you for the notes explaining how to write this one.
I will consider the challenge. The picture and color scheme perfect for this piece of poetry. God bless.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
Really nice shelli kaye, I thank you for the notes explaining how to write this one.
I will consider the challenge. The picture and color scheme perfect for this piece of poetry. God bless.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx lots for swirling by ;-)
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LOL!
Comment from Annmuma
I loved it!! It was as light and 'swirly' as the accompanying artwork. They work well together and I enjoyed 'reading' both the art and the poem.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
I loved it!! It was as light and 'swirly' as the accompanying artwork. They work well together and I enjoyed 'reading' both the art and the poem.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2007
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007
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thanx lots!! :-)