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Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

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A collection of poetry.

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Comment from mslink1
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lol, I love this. Remember the one, "One little , two little...etc. monkeys laying in bed, one rolled over, and the other one said---roll over-rollover. Well, maybe you're not as old as I, but I remember it well:) This is too, cute and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Mary

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    I DO remember that one :-) I taught ti to the boys and they used to want to sing it at bed time lol.

    I'm glad you enjoyed this silliness!
Comment from Aster 5
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Such a cute and really enjoyable poem. My head is buzzing with a new song--one little boy------four----LOL.
The naughy boys sure bring excitement all around--atleast the mother will not have insomnia after all that fatigue.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    LOL... nope, no insomnia... she's to beat! So much to do... so little time... and harder still with so many running around :-)
Comment from jane63
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Hey, great poem, I'm with you all the way here, being a mother of two boys and having childminded for years. I like the ending, been there got the t shirt.
Great work, best wishes
Jane

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2007
    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I, too, watch children for a living and this is a chapter straight from the book of my life!