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Poetry, Dreams In Motion.

Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Weeping Willow"
A collection of poetry.

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Comment from TwoJs
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Ok.
I am not reading anything else of yours today. This time you made me cry. Enough is enough. LOL. Thanks for the excellent read. Your ability to put us there is terrific. Great piece. Thank You

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007
    I did not wish to make you cry... though I am glad the poem touched you as it was meant to do. I am also glad that you stopped in to give me another read. it is always nice to know you have captured anothers attention :-)
Comment from Dreamdancer
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Breath taking!
This is a beautiful piece my friend. Your imagery allows the reader to see the poets thoughts and the flow captivates from beginning to end... Dancing in Dreams

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007
    I am so glad you enjoyed it. Though it was a sad piece to write, I was fascinated by the innocent love captured beneath the willow tree and wanted to bring something to life that spoke not only of the passing of years, but the love that bound them all together.
Comment from Journal Jo
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A beautiful poem with lots of different emotions throughout. I like the
way it rhyms and the structure is perfect. I would recommend it highly
and hope to read more poems by you. I especially like the words
"youth a passing breeze."
Journal Jo

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 20-Jul-2007
    I liked those words as well, though I struggled to get them from my head to the paper in a way I could approve of LOL I'm thankful my pen finally realized what I wanted and jumped in :-D I am glad that you enjoyed it and even more so that you would recomend it to others.
reply by Journal Jo on 20-Jul-2007
    Welcome
    Jo
Comment from Kingsland
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I really enjoyed reading this well written verse
this piece has a lot of emotions within its thoughts
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed this well written verse...

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2007

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2007
    Thank you kingsland, I am always glad to have you stop in and review my work. Your comments are always appreciated :-)