Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Times' Embrace"A collection of poetry.
3 total reviews
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
This was such an enjoyable read
the rhythm was so silky smooth
and the content was just beautiful
The title didn't makes sense to me before I clicked
my original thought was huh? I wonder if they meant " time embraced"
but after reading this it makes perfect sense now and is the perfect title.
You did an excellent job on this and I have no choice but to give you five
stars, God Bless, Suzi
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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This was such an enjoyable read
the rhythm was so silky smooth
and the content was just beautiful
The title didn't makes sense to me before I clicked
my original thought was huh? I wonder if they meant " time embraced"
but after reading this it makes perfect sense now and is the perfect title.
You did an excellent job on this and I have no choice but to give you five
stars, God Bless, Suzi
Comment Written 07-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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LOL... yes, the title was a bit of a stumper when I was trying to figure out what would encompass the meaning of the poem... but after a while, that one just seemed to say it all. :-)
Thank you so much for this wonderful review and taking the time to read my work!
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is beautifully written. Nice rhythm and rhyme (even slant, which I like). We all have that one that got away. We tend to measure others against the perfection of the illusion we create in our minds about that particular lover and find no one can compare. I have mine....deeply rooted in the depths of my soul. Fine writing. One small correction, if you don't mind:
trapped in times embrace- ~ should be "time's"
Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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This is beautifully written. Nice rhythm and rhyme (even slant, which I like). We all have that one that got away. We tend to measure others against the perfection of the illusion we create in our minds about that particular lover and find no one can compare. I have mine....deeply rooted in the depths of my soul. Fine writing. One small correction, if you don't mind:
trapped in times embrace- ~ should be "time's"
Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 07-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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Ooooppppssss... :-P
Yup, you're right... *slaps forehead*.....it should be. I will make that change as soon as I have finished these words! Good eye.... I must have read over it a million times without seeing that error.
Thank you for your lovely comments. I as well have a love I hold deep in my heart. I have yet to find any man that can compare or even comes close. But perhaps, if I am lucky, I might find someone even better. :-)
Comment from BeMused
Well done - the flow is exceptional and the images produced by your descriptives clear. This is very good poetry of love, and love lost. Keep writing.
Regards,
BeMused
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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Well done - the flow is exceptional and the images produced by your descriptives clear. This is very good poetry of love, and love lost. Keep writing.
Regards,
BeMused
Comment Written 07-Jul-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2007
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem! :-)
