Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "New Wave Partnership"A collection of poetry.
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Comment from cassie99
Bravo! Your work flows very well and the mesage that you are conveying emits easily from the verses. The lightness of the rhyme doesn't take away from the power of the message. Thank you for the chance to read this piece. Chris
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Bravo! Your work flows very well and the mesage that you are conveying emits easily from the verses. The lightness of the rhyme doesn't take away from the power of the message. Thank you for the chance to read this piece. Chris
Comment Written 29-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Thank you for sharing your opinion (and the pretty stars are always a nice touch as well :-) I am glad that you enjoyed it and I look forward to sharing others with you as well!
Comment from AK
Dear Ricouard,
Unfortunately what you write is becoming very common in today's society. It really is much easier for those who work largely from their computer to also socialize the same way and
it is very sad that the human interactions lose that edge.
For children especially, it is dangerous, for they become so self-involved that they
sometimes find it difficult to maintain thei health, both physical and mental. I can easily see this as a destructive force in a relationship, when left unchecked.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Warm regards,
Ami
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Dear Ricouard,
Unfortunately what you write is becoming very common in today's society. It really is much easier for those who work largely from their computer to also socialize the same way and
it is very sad that the human interactions lose that edge.
For children especially, it is dangerous, for they become so self-involved that they
sometimes find it difficult to maintain thei health, both physical and mental. I can easily see this as a destructive force in a relationship, when left unchecked.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Warm regards,
Ami
Comment Written 29-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Thank YOU for taking the time to read those thoughts. It is an unfortunate occurance and I believe it has destroyed MANY relationships. "Real life" seems to have lost its appeal for too many people and if we are not careful, I dare say, what we once hailed as an amazing breakthrough in technology will be the downfall of a healthy society.
Comment from Susan E. Pennycuff
Sadly this rings of so much truth
I actually know someone who got a divorce on the grounds of the computer being the third party in the marriage and the judge granted the divorce on the basis of adultry.
I think sometimes married couples do not realize that a computer can and does become as consumming in a relationship as another woman/man and will inspire jealous as such. Time is time and it doesn't matter rather it is a person, sport or object that is consuming it, it will evoke jealousy.
very well done here.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Sadly this rings of so much truth
I actually know someone who got a divorce on the grounds of the computer being the third party in the marriage and the judge granted the divorce on the basis of adultry.
I think sometimes married couples do not realize that a computer can and does become as consumming in a relationship as another woman/man and will inspire jealous as such. Time is time and it doesn't matter rather it is a person, sport or object that is consuming it, it will evoke jealousy.
very well done here.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2007
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2007
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Sadly, it IS true in so MANY ways. I wrote this in a fit of anger because my significant other was surfing for women. Obviously "real life" has lost too much appeal in todays society. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and, of course, the wonderful stars!
