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Comment from mmichelle97219
OH GROSS! I could never understand chewing tobacco. My uncle had part of his jaw removed beacuse of cancer due to chew, and it always bothered me that he still chewed after that. Nice poem, buy yuck.
Michell
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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OH GROSS! I could never understand chewing tobacco. My uncle had part of his jaw removed beacuse of cancer due to chew, and it always bothered me that he still chewed after that. Nice poem, buy yuck.
Michell
Comment Written 04-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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eewww didnt stop him huh? lol
thanx lots for r&r! :-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi shelley No I don't want a kiss. sound spretty sick, Just thinking about the ((symol ))of how chewing tobacco is the way to death trhough Cancer.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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Hi shelley No I don't want a kiss. sound spretty sick, Just thinking about the ((symol ))of how chewing tobacco is the way to death trhough Cancer.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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hehehehe
thanx lots! :-)
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Hello You are so cute with you little laugh.
Gert
Comment from Norbanus
With smiles that smell of snaggle teeth
and good ol' Red Barn snuff.
You've given proof to my belief
that you are good enough
to write a verse and make it sing
on anything you choose.
It we had been a-wagering,
it's clear enough I'd lose.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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With smiles that smell of snaggle teeth
and good ol' Red Barn snuff.
You've given proof to my belief
that you are good enough
to write a verse and make it sing
on anything you choose.
It we had been a-wagering,
it's clear enough I'd lose.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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hehehehe
thank you so much!! :-)
Comment from danielg29
What must we do not that your lips are wet,
Let's pass on the kiss while I smoke on this cigarette.
You can say I puff but I like to call it toking or drag,
If I were in England I would simply be smoking a fag.
Forgot your question so now I can't answer it,
My mind is cloudy from this damn cancer stick.
To get another, there's no limit to what the Marlboro Man'll do,
Dorals, are Kool, so are Newports and Camels too.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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What must we do not that your lips are wet,
Let's pass on the kiss while I smoke on this cigarette.
You can say I puff but I like to call it toking or drag,
If I were in England I would simply be smoking a fag.
Forgot your question so now I can't answer it,
My mind is cloudy from this damn cancer stick.
To get another, there's no limit to what the Marlboro Man'll do,
Dorals, are Kool, so are Newports and Camels too.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2007
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five stars to you ***** great poem ;-)
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Just a spur of the moment type thing that I thought was fun. I hope it made you laugh a little as that was the intention
Comment from Oatmeal
Shelley,
I have only dated one man in my life that dipped. This man happened to be my daughters father. I just could not handle that bad habit. Cups of spit around the room...eeww!
I am clean off cigarettes for around 90 days now! It is hard but I am staying strong.
Very informative and soulful, full of vivid impressions, effective and impressive.
The descriptive you chose were good ones.
Telling things very plainly and comprehensibly.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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Shelley,
I have only dated one man in my life that dipped. This man happened to be my daughters father. I just could not handle that bad habit. Cups of spit around the room...eeww!
I am clean off cigarettes for around 90 days now! It is hard but I am staying strong.
Very informative and soulful, full of vivid impressions, effective and impressive.
The descriptive you chose were good ones.
Telling things very plainly and comprehensibly.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 03-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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woohooo!! three months! great job! :-)
Comment from drivenbackward
Pretty nasty stuff. You were successful in grossing out your reader with strong visuals.
my lips now wet and shiny.... --- Ellipsis is only three dots.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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Pretty nasty stuff. You were successful in grossing out your reader with strong visuals.
my lips now wet and shiny.... --- Ellipsis is only three dots.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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thanx lots! :-)
Comment from Lady & Louis
Eeeeuuuuwww gross! Just what smokers deserve to have written (they're no better than tobacco chewers!)
Nicely done Madame, very neat!
Cheers
La Ma :)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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Eeeeuuuuwww gross! Just what smokers deserve to have written (they're no better than tobacco chewers!)
Nicely done Madame, very neat!
Cheers
La Ma :)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2007
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2007
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hehehehe thanx lots! :-)
