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Comment from angel of the quill
life is gone....
never....
the mystery
is always there....
what a lovely thought that life will never go and a mystery is always there just around the corner
as we celebrate holiday seasons whether true belief or not it is something in there
the thought of a mystery was he
or wasn't he the miracle every one wanted to see
i personally believe and i understand those who don't
though the poem is on a different topic to a degree i won't
say this doesn't tie in to faith fully
this is a lovely poem by a lovely
person who is a blessing even when she doesn't realize it
to people who read her every word feeling it more than a bit
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2006
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life is gone....
never....
the mystery
is always there....
what a lovely thought that life will never go and a mystery is always there just around the corner
as we celebrate holiday seasons whether true belief or not it is something in there
the thought of a mystery was he
or wasn't he the miracle every one wanted to see
i personally believe and i understand those who don't
though the poem is on a different topic to a degree i won't
say this doesn't tie in to faith fully
this is a lovely poem by a lovely
person who is a blessing even when she doesn't realize it
to people who read her every word feeling it more than a bit
Comment Written 23-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2006
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i totally believe is reincarnation
once we are done with our present bodies
we travel on...............
thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts
shelley :-)
Comment from sengwriter
Shelley
How nice you write about life, it gave me pleasure so much so that I read it for again and again. You said some comments from Easy motivated you to write such a nice poem and I tell you that your thoughts expressed here about life is full of life which motivated me to add two more lines to your poem at the end - would you mind if I express here my dear friend?
"life is gone....
never....
the mystery
is always there....
remaining ever alive
on the contrary...
Gautam :)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2006
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Shelley
How nice you write about life, it gave me pleasure so much so that I read it for again and again. You said some comments from Easy motivated you to write such a nice poem and I tell you that your thoughts expressed here about life is full of life which motivated me to add two more lines to your poem at the end - would you mind if I express here my dear friend?
"life is gone....
never....
the mystery
is always there....
remaining ever alive
on the contrary...
Gautam :)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2006
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cool!
thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts
shelley :-)
Comment from Jerry1111
Again, your words have strength. The contrasts (without which life would quickly be gone) of life are very nicely presented. I saw nothing to change.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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Again, your words have strength. The contrasts (without which life would quickly be gone) of life are very nicely presented. I saw nothing to change.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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thank you lots! :-)
Comment from tecate
How you jump from subject to subject like a moth circling a candle. Can't hear you, and only catch glimpses of you, but yet you disappear and leave such beautiful words inscribed in the illumination...Tecate
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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How you jump from subject to subject like a moth circling a candle. Can't hear you, and only catch glimpses of you, but yet you disappear and leave such beautiful words inscribed in the illumination...Tecate
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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hehehe
thanx lots :-)
Comment from Oatmeal
Shelley,
Very nice poem. I saw no errors. My favorite part was- life is luscious....with the soft green grass of summer, beautiful newborns of colorful flowers, crisp chill of autumn turning
to winter, and a white blanket nourishing the earth
It is so descriptive!
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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Shelley,
Very nice poem. I saw no errors. My favorite part was- life is luscious....with the soft green grass of summer, beautiful newborns of colorful flowers, crisp chill of autumn turning
to winter, and a white blanket nourishing the earth
It is so descriptive!
Oatmeal
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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plus, the "beautiful newborns of colorful flowers" can have a double meaning too
hehehehe
thanx lots for R&R! :-)
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Shelley,
Yes and I should of mentioned it but did not. LOL
Love,
Oatmeal
Comment from maryam jilani
its beautiful Shelly. you have managed to portray all the faces of life. truly everyone feels like that and thus can relate to everything you have said. i love this stanza
life is found....
in a child's first smile,
lovers' first kiss
the twinkle in the eye
as you meet "the one"
for the first time
its so beautifully presented. i love it.
cheers, Maryam
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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its beautiful Shelly. you have managed to portray all the faces of life. truly everyone feels like that and thus can relate to everything you have said. i love this stanza
life is found....
in a child's first smile,
lovers' first kiss
the twinkle in the eye
as you meet "the one"
for the first time
its so beautifully presented. i love it.
cheers, Maryam
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from easyeverett
I am honored Shelley both because my words inspired this write but more so because of the quality of the creation itself. You confirm my belief that creativity of any kind is a magical experience, vague in it's essence, yet blatant in it's effect when accomplished with discipline and talent. You did good. easy
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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I am honored Shelley both because my words inspired this write but more so because of the quality of the creation itself. You confirm my belief that creativity of any kind is a magical experience, vague in it's essence, yet blatant in it's effect when accomplished with discipline and talent. You did good. easy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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thank you lots!! :-)
Comment from corydm
Excellent...."river rapids of tears"......I love that
Life captured, dissected and explained.
Very well done
Reminds me that life is just life and everything else is just relative
I so enjoy reading your work!
Cory
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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Excellent...."river rapids of tears"......I love that
Life captured, dissected and explained.
Very well done
Reminds me that life is just life and everything else is just relative
I so enjoy reading your work!
Cory
Comment Written 22-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2006
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hehe
thank you lots! :-)
