Comment from Beatlegirl61

Excellent

You've done a brilliant job with your entry here...Very creative and good use of the wordage provided!! I love the artwork and thought it was a great addition to the poetry...Good luck!!
Peace and good will...Carol ::)

'beatle' quote today: "Yesterday...all my troubles seemed so far away..."

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2006

thank you lots!!!! :-)

Comment from Buckshot99

Excellent

Seems like you met Luna's challenge head on. Well done. Nice rhyme, great subject matter and wonderful flowing verse. Good job.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2006

thank you lots :-)

Comment from rl dubour

Excellent

Lizzy's secret--- ah but dont we all have our secrets? very good job her on this with really great imagery, going to pass on the challenge however, good job, ron

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2006

i dare you to write a poem story about a leprechaun ;-)

reply by rl dubour on 13-Dec-2006

you dare eh? well I will let you know, lol

reply by rl dubour on 13-Dec-2006

me too

Comment from luna

Exceptional

Gotta hand it to you, Pix, you nailed it. Good show. Was wondering what ye'd come up with, and you didn't disappoint. Now take these six stars and file them wherever you file your stars.

Luvya,

J *smile*

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

COOL!!!
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH!!! :-)

Comment from Pave-Ment

Excellent

Another one of Your great poems.
It's a bit confusing, but it only gives it more "mystery".
Again! Nothing to "complain" about! Something's wrong... (laugh)
Respect and greetings from snowy Poland.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

and lots of thank you's from sunny california usa :-)

reply by Pave-Ment on 13-Dec-2006

The pleasure is all mine.

Comment from GregoryC

Excellent

Delightful and stirring poem with plenty of Irish green! There's a littlel bit of the pixie and a lot of the blarney! Love the Irish dancer and the top illustration. Great combo. You've covered all the requirements of the contest and it looks to me to be a real winner. Good luck.
GregoryC

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

cool!!
thank you lots! :-)

Comment from songbird77

Average

That was really cute and interesting.Love the drawing also.Good detail in your work although I thought it could have been longer.Over all i enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

may i ask why longer?
just curious ;-)
thanx lots for R&R! :-)

Comment from fanlight

Excellent

I liked this attempt at Lunas' challenge - it has a story - Lizzy liked the light and that is what drew her - but in the "darkness" of her mind she was afraid the light of the will-o-the-wisp would go out - so all alone where would she hide? A shame so many people have read this but not taken the time to comment on such a valiant effort that has all the required details - take care - Fanlight

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

lol
well i thank YOU for taking the time to comment and share your thoughts :-)

Comment from Mackie

Excellent

What can one say about someone who can write such an excellent poem as a challenge? You're a truly talented poet. This poem is light-hearted and entertaining.
Well done.
Mackie

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2006

hehehe
maybe check out the rest of my 'challenges' in this book?
i think you'd probably like 'em!
enjoy and thanx for reading! :-)