Challenge Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Myself Within"I dare you....
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Comment from Beatlegirl61
Again...another 'job' well done!! I want to do this one (challenge) as well...I feel this is very spiritual as well as being very much to the pint. I think this is philosophical too and oprovokes the thoughts of the reader...Nicely written and good luck!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'bealle' quote today: "Life is good, life is earnest...when it's cold turn up the furnace" (Herman Munster) lol
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2006
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Again...another 'job' well done!! I want to do this one (challenge) as well...I feel this is very spiritual as well as being very much to the pint. I think this is philosophical too and oprovokes the thoughts of the reader...Nicely written and good luck!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'bealle' quote today: "Life is good, life is earnest...when it's cold turn up the furnace" (Herman Munster) lol
Comment Written 24-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2006
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cool!
thank you lots :-)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written it is a strong poem and I like the way you have used the rose for presentation it works very well I think you have fulfilled the challenge well done regards Fuller
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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This is very well written it is a strong poem and I like the way you have used the rose for presentation it works very well I think you have fulfilled the challenge well done regards Fuller
Comment Written 23-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from bworth83
loved this poem and only found fault with the 2nd paragraph where it said many in 4 of the 5 lines. But other than that the flow of the poem was there and it was just great to read
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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loved this poem and only found fault with the 2nd paragraph where it said many in 4 of the 5 lines. But other than that the flow of the poem was there and it was just great to read
Comment Written 23-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from Jane Julius
OH, I just LOVED your poem. I like how in the second staza how you repeated the word "many" many times. That was cool.
"and writing is life" . . . I loved that part
I agree with all your ideas about writing, and I've said some of those exact words before.
I loved the last staza too!!!!!!!!!!
Jane
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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OH, I just LOVED your poem. I like how in the second staza how you repeated the word "many" many times. That was cool.
"and writing is life" . . . I loved that part
I agree with all your ideas about writing, and I've said some of those exact words before.
I loved the last staza too!!!!!!!!!!
Jane
Comment Written 23-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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COOL!
thank you so much :-)
Comment from KING SLATON
This is quite a combination of words you were given to make good use of Shelley.
I think you've done a fine job with your challenge and I would not change a thing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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This is quite a combination of words you were given to make good use of Shelley.
I think you've done a fine job with your challenge and I would not change a thing.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from rl dubour
Myself Within---you know what your wording in the contents of this write are from your pen directly controlled by your heart! excellent job with really great imagery and you have captured the meaning of why we write. great job and another great challenge that you have passed with flying colors, ron
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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Myself Within---you know what your wording in the contents of this write are from your pen directly controlled by your heart! excellent job with really great imagery and you have captured the meaning of why we write. great job and another great challenge that you have passed with flying colors, ron
Comment Written 22-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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thank you so much :-)
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not a problem anytime, ron
Comment from luna
Pix, I'm going to change your name to Challenge! You aced this one also. This admittedly was a much more zen-like (considering the source of your challenge) write than the combined challenge that Ron and I presented you with. That just goes to show how well you can turn on a dime and write about anything. As usual, your presentation was beautiful. Well done, young one.
yf,
Jenny *smile*
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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Pix, I'm going to change your name to Challenge! You aced this one also. This admittedly was a much more zen-like (considering the source of your challenge) write than the combined challenge that Ron and I presented you with. That just goes to show how well you can turn on a dime and write about anything. As usual, your presentation was beautiful. Well done, young one.
yf,
Jenny *smile*
Comment Written 22-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2006
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COOL!
thanx lots :-)
Comment from glo2
This is pretty deep, but the message is there for all who care to read beyond the words. The colors immediately draw this reader in, classic blac and reds--then teh beauty of the inspiring words!
Fave line: Life is never linear--so true
I enjoyed the whole piece, Write on!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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This is pretty deep, but the message is there for all who care to read beyond the words. The colors immediately draw this reader in, classic blac and reds--then teh beauty of the inspiring words!
Fave line: Life is never linear--so true
I enjoyed the whole piece, Write on!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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yea i like that line to
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from Loren S
A truer description of writing I haven't found. You captured the soul of writers in this one. I saw your profile a while back and thought it was really neat and creative. I like so much about what I read there.
Terrific job from the heart. Thank you for describing so many of us.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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A truer description of writing I haven't found. You captured the soul of writers in this one. I saw your profile a while back and thought it was really neat and creative. I like so much about what I read there.
Terrific job from the heart. Thank you for describing so many of us.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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and thank YOU for reading it and sharing your thoughts :-)
Comment from ishta
very well done, and interesting. YOu show a lot of talent here, and that was a tough thing to live up to when looking at the image of a rose, you have done it, brave one. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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very well done, and interesting. YOu show a lot of talent here, and that was a tough thing to live up to when looking at the image of a rose, you have done it, brave one. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2006
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2006
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and thank YOU for reading and sharing your thoughts with me :-)
