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Startling Starlings

Thousands of birds moving as one.

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with a positive, fanciful theme and the imagery
of nature in flight.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Much appreciated, Robert. Thank you.
Comment from Mark Jackson
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I love to see murmurations. I have found them impossible to photograph. I think it is all about the movement and this is why your words do a much better job than the image. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Nice words, Mark. I?m grateful. I guess your comment explains why I couldn?t locate a photograph of a really big, dense murmuration.
reply by Mark Jackson on 27-Apr-2024
    Yes, you only see the patterns on film.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thanks.