Distance
so far...2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
of longing and dreams with very good imagery.
A peaceful scene that's is very appealing.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
of longing and dreams with very good imagery.
A peaceful scene that's is very appealing.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I knew I wouldn't win, but I usually go with the first words that come to mind.
Comment from Julie Helms
An interesting concept here as the distant horizon by definition can never be reached. Your poem gives a good sense of striving or hoping for the unattainable, a pretty intense concept in such a few words!
Julie
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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An interesting concept here as the distant horizon by definition can never be reached. Your poem gives a good sense of striving or hoping for the unattainable, a pretty intense concept in such a few words!
Julie
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind words and for reviewing.
