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California Style Family Life

Raising a California family was fun

14 total reviews 
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Your daughters will be so pleased some day to have this record of their growing-up years. It paints a beautiful portrait of what it means to be a family. There are a few typos and grammatical errors, but they don't seem to take away for this lovely diary entry.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Mark Jackson
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This narrative beautifully recounts the journey of a mother raising her three daughters, from their birth to their achievements in adulthood. The story is filled with warmth, love, and the challenges of motherhood, making it relatable and touching. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
    Thank you
Comment from joann r romei
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Great essay on the blessed life you have, maybe one day you can write down an experience where the girls followed through on your guidance and it paid off.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it very much. My life indeed has been blessed.
Comment from Wendy G
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You are right to be pleased with and proud of your three daughters, all of whom have shown what it is to do their best in all their endeavours. That's their response to your love. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from royowen
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It's so good to hear how a functional family, no family is perfect, but we serve a perfect God, and when He is the third strand in the union one has an unbreakable bond. So good to read your testimony, congratulations to you and Wayne for serving God, He loves the generations, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice comment. I appreciate it very much. Also thanks for the stars.
reply by royowen on 27-Apr-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from jim vecchio
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What a beautiful story! God certainly blessed you and your husband. My wife and I were fated only to have one child, born in our first year of marriage, and my wife suffered a terrible infection. But, though she has her problems, she is very Godly and loves to write songs and sing for Christ.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice comment.
reply by jim vecchio on 28-Apr-2024
    Please forgive if I seem long in replying. Our wifi is going out here and I keep getting disconnected.
Comment from juliaSjames
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You have a way with words that holds the interest of the reader. I am sure your daughters and their own children will be proud of your loving parenting, even when you were challenged by health issues. In my own childhood I was loved and cherished. But my mother was not there to teach me life skills (she migrated when I was a preteen) although my grandmother raised me to the best of her ability. Thank you for sharing an important part of your life as mother and homemaker.

Blessings, Julia

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you so very much for for taking the time to review my story and leave such nice comments. I appreciate it greatly have a great weekend.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I feel the love and pride you have for your daughters and your husband. I share the same thing with my wife and children. They are very different Kids.
Your writing is straightforward making it clear and easy to follow.
It was a ver y nice read and I could feel your enjoyment as you wroteceach word.
RJ

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for reviewing my work and I appreciate it very much. I wish you a very good weekend. I do intend to keep writing as long as I can.
reply by RJ Heritage on 27-Apr-2024
    You are welcome
    RJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you taught your daughters to become responsible adults Patricia and I know you have a wonderful relationship with them. Your advice is good here as you taught them from a young age to be responsible for their own time and I wish my daughter would be this way with my Granddaughter who still relies on my daughter to get her to go to school at the age of 13! You can look back and be proud of yourself Patricia, I enjoyed your story here and thank you for sharing this with us, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice review.
Comment from fm wright
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Truly an inspirational story. Yes, God certainly has blessed you. The entire story held my interest from start to finish. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you for your most lovely review. I appreciate it very much.
reply by fm wright on 27-Apr-2024
    You're ever so welcome.