APril Poetry Madness
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "April 10 to April 15 Poems"My April Poems
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is nicely done. The poem's length might benefit from some pruning to enhance readability. But overall, for me, your poem makes you think about our place in the world. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is nicely done. The poem's length might benefit from some pruning to enhance readability. But overall, for me, your poem makes you think about our place in the world. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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thanks again
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading the middle section the best, when it came to how the computer seemed to be mad at you. There are some clever writing prompts here. My favorite lines were:
Who is this general Failure
And why is he reading my files?
I think I would capitalize General there.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I liked reading the middle section the best, when it came to how the computer seemed to be mad at you. There are some clever writing prompts here. My favorite lines were:
Who is this general Failure
And why is he reading my files?
I think I would capitalize General there.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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thanks a lot
