Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I get it. Very creative and you took a challenge I passed on, because I could not do what you did so perfectly. The dialogue was authentic and fun and it ended well. This matched the perfect image too. Thank you for sharing this.

Best wishes,

Alexandra

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Hello Alexandra: Your review removed my doubts about anyone understanding the subtle conflict I am having with the feelings perhaps most of us carry; that is who I am and why I am here? I am glad you understood the poem; especially the Latin quote. I thank you very much for the valuation of five stars. I think you will like my other poems collected in my book,"Random Reflections", available in my portfolio here. All the best.
Arun K. Potdar

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem was a wonderful read. It makes you think about existence! Not something I thought I'd be doing tonight. :) I like how your poem also has us contemplate the mysteries of the universe and our place within it. Very nicely done!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Michael: I appreciate your comments very much. At first, I felt it was handling a too complicated subject we often visit but not dwell upon and may not get understood; however, your comment proved me wrong. Please visit my portfolio and read 45 poems, most are on the similar subject. Thanks for the great valuation of five star.
Al the best.
Arun K. Potdar