Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

What an intriguing and original story which I found very entertaining. I enjoyed the way the notebook took revenge and I found the description of this vivid and well crafted. Most particularly I was impressed by how your prompt words fitted in so seamlessly. Very well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you so much for the encouraging review!

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

This is a fantastic story! You have used the word pairs creatively and seamlessly. Thanks so much for participating in the contest (twice!), you show what creativity can bloom even under some serious restrictions.

Some suggestions:

notebooks plan.
(notebook's plan)

laughed it could.
(laughed if it could)

Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thanks! I think I'm too late to edit it, not sure.

reply by Julie Helms on 26-Apr-2024

I think you still have till midnight.

Comment from Mike Stevens

Exceptional

You, Hull, are one excellent writer. Such a unique angle, such a unique perspective, you have the gift of pennage! This is the kind of story I wish I could write

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024

Thank you!

reply by Mike Stevens on 26-Apr-2024

You're welcome, Hull, most deserving

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

First of all, I want to say that I'm honoured that you've used the nouns and verbs from my story Who's To Say.

You have written an intriguing tale of the view of a notebook. I really liked it. It's quite unique. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks so much!