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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Beautiful descriptions and presentation. Again, thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.


garbed in saffron sun tunic

an anointed with meteor showers (Did you mean '
and anointed'?? I'm not a poet so may be wrong.)

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you very ., Barbara

    gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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an anointed --- did you mean AND anointed?

this was a great poetic description of the greek goddess of love and beauty
nice imagery and smooth flow of words throughout

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley, I fixed it.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, Aphrodite or Venus was quite the quite the beauty and was known to cause quite the Trojan War after she got the golden apple by bribing Paris with the love of Helen of Troy. So many stories about these Greek gods and goddesses.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister

    love,
    MariVal
Comment from kahpot
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A wonderful read, your description and descriptive words of this Goddess are excellent, love the alliteration throughout, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Kym. Have a wonderful day.

    gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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One can't help admiring the ancient gods and goddesses, they were more sinful and powerful than any man. Clothed with power and might, they still used that power to laud it over a weak and frail human mass that bowed before these less than perfect models. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Roy. Have a wonderful day.

    gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 24-Apr-2024
    You too.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Well as you know Aphrodite is Greej and Venus is her Roman equivalant. Beautiful and the epĂ­tome of love and desire.
Very pretty imagery and compelling words.
RJ

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
    Thank you, RJ. Have a wonderful day.

    gypsy hugs
reply by RJ Heritage on 25-Apr-2024
    You're welcome