The Fool
My entry for the nonet contest.3 total reviews
Comment from gansach
It is amazing how much of a story can be told in forty-five syllables, expresses the feeling of the poem well, and the chosen picture is a perfect illustration. Very well done, good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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It is amazing how much of a story can be told in forty-five syllables, expresses the feeling of the poem well, and the chosen picture is a perfect illustration. Very well done, good luck!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from RodG
Hmmm, who sang that classic "The Fool on the Hill"? Sergio Mendez? This poem makes it easy to visualize the Fool donning his clothes and climbing steadily to the top of the hill.
And your artwork is terrific. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Hmmm, who sang that classic "The Fool on the Hill"? Sergio Mendez? This poem makes it easy to visualize the Fool donning his clothes and climbing steadily to the top of the hill.
And your artwork is terrific. Rod
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is great I really like this. I had expected them to be centered but I think this is the correct presentation. I did write one myself earlier only to find out I wasn't allowed to enter. I found the last three lines the main challenge, but I think yours are great.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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That is great I really like this. I had expected them to be centered but I think this is the correct presentation. I did write one myself earlier only to find out I wasn't allowed to enter. I found the last three lines the main challenge, but I think yours are great.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much!
I did wonder whether it would be better centered but for some reason I was having a lot of trouble copy/pasting and never got round to it.
