Comment from gansach

Excellent

Wonderful imagery presented, even with so brief a poem, so much is conveyed by the smooth flow of the words and the illustration goes with it perfectly. A very good contribution to the contest. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

So kind. Thank you.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I really like how you urge your reader to visualize a couple waltzing in time to that lovely song "The Blue Danube."
Good camera work and wonderful artwork chosen to accompany your poem. Rod

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thanks, Rod.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

You do make this sound like a "beautiful, elegant, sensual dance." You got the syllable count right, as well. I can't dance properly, either. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thank you, J.

Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I like this, it is not the first dance poem I have read this week. Before I realised I could not enter this contest, I tried to rhyme my Nonet I can tell you it is not advised makes the ending very difficult. Yours was very elegant.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024

Thanks, Mark.