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An Ocean of Dreams

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NaPoWriMo contest entry

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Comment from ~Dovey
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Good morning!
I am so glad that you are joining in NaPoWriMo this year! My youngest and her new baby sleep to ocean sounds. Your poem reminds me of that serenity! Beautiful! Good luck in the contest!

Kim

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Hi Kim, thank you for your comments and review. I'm a little late starting, but I think the contest deadline is May 4. Is that true? Thank you for your good luck wishes. Donna
reply by ~Dovey on 19-Apr-2024
    It wouldn't let me put May 1st as the deadline, so there is a little grace period there.
    Good to hear from you, Donna! I know you can make the deadline!

    Kim
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Dear Kim, I didn't understand your reply about "It wouldn't let me but May 1st as the deadline..."
    Is the deadline May 4? Donna
reply by ~Dovey on 22-Apr-2024
    Yes, it is the 4th, but only because when I created the contest, Fanstory wouldn't let me choose April 1st. The goal was for 30 poems in April, as always.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Hi Kim, I believe that I will only have 29 poems, maybe not even that as I don't have access to a computer on weekends. Maybe I'll have better luck next year, if I'm still around (I'll be 69 years old then) Donna
reply by ~Dovey on 22-Apr-2024
    The date is set to the 4th. Try to write them all and then finish posting. No worries there. I think you can do it! :)
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well rhymed poem that you have written, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And you have a blessed day and a wonderful weekend. Patricia .

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Hi Patricia, thanks for your comments and review. A blessed day to you too! Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, An Ocean of Dreams, presented with three quatrains and a couplet, sets sea here and begins the poetic anthology of our own Dovemarie......................................

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Dear Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove