Mornings!
Beautiful mornings2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
So much for taking the time to review my work I appreciate it very much. You say you're still in school may I ask how old you are. God bless. I am 86 almost Patricia
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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So much for taking the time to review my work I appreciate it very much. You say you're still in school may I ask how old you are. God bless. I am 86 almost Patricia
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you! And I'm 14
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Since you said you were just 14 I would like to encourage you to keep writing. Writing is an excellent way to stay educated in it. Also an excellent way to stay healthy because you can write down your feelings and no one needs to know except you. I wish you the very best as a young person and I hope you have a wonderful happy life. Patricia , a great grandmother who has great grandchildren, older than you.
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I will, thank you
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is quite strange when using rhyming it is usual to use a rhyming scheme you know aa,bb,cc or abab,cdcd. So I looked at your and I got abccbbdeeff. Pretty strange really. Not that it is bad writing just a little strange to read.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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This is quite strange when using rhyming it is usual to use a rhyming scheme you know aa,bb,cc or abab,cdcd. So I looked at your and I got abccbbdeeff. Pretty strange really. Not that it is bad writing just a little strange to read.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Okay I'll keep that in mind
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Keep writing
