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Mind Expansion -Get ready

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your writing beautifully paints a picture of a utopian society. I love that you included details such as the futuristic transportation systems and the sustainable living practices. You show us an interesting and a better world. Your attention to detail is excellent. I thought this was very creative and very interesting!

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thanks much...John
Comment from jim vecchio
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I think I understand what you are saying, but in achieving equality, interconnectedness and overall smooth flow of things, we sacrifice beauty, such as the old Route 66, the old transcontinental railroad, etc. When we have a group of people working and cooperating towards a specific goal, let's say, writing a script, it becomes a stable. My old grad school prof once said, "You know what comes out of stables."

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Creative thinking never stops. If we consider Route 66 more beautiful than Mother Earth's beauty, cognitive dissonance sets in. You are correct in the collective effort creating Utopia, though.
reply by jim vecchio on 17-Apr-2024
    It just seems the more we tear apart neighborhoods and traditions, the less connected and understanding we become.