Still Wrapped
A four-line poem15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Still Wrapped, has the proper formatting and seems to speak to the abortion issue. If I am wrong, I am sorry. The sadness comes through.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This four-line poem, Still Wrapped, has the proper formatting and seems to speak to the abortion issue. If I am wrong, I am sorry. The sadness comes through.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mrsmajor
I'm with you, Kahpot, I don't see things getting any better, so yes, with much sadness, but relief, lets go back to the sender!
I know for sure, we'd get better treatment...God loves All of us!
Good 4 line entry...Good Luck!
All the best to you and yours!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I'm with you, Kahpot, I don't see things getting any better, so yes, with much sadness, but relief, lets go back to the sender!
I know for sure, we'd get better treatment...God loves All of us!
Good 4 line entry...Good Luck!
All the best to you and yours!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Victoria, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You're very welcome, it was my pleasure...Take Care!
Victoria
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-I agree with your note about doing better than we are.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You do a good job establishing the premise
of the gifts we have been given at birth.
-You make a good point at the end that
we are not doing the job we should be
about protecting and appreciating these rights.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-I agree with your note about doing better than we are.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You do a good job establishing the premise
of the gifts we have been given at birth.
-You make a good point at the end that
we are not doing the job we should be
about protecting and appreciating these rights.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, Kahpot.
Comment from June Sargent
Very powerful and thought provoking poem. Born with the freedom to choose, it's sad mankind doesn't not have enough love for their fellow men to maintain peace. Well said.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Very powerful and thought provoking poem. Born with the freedom to choose, it's sad mankind doesn't not have enough love for their fellow men to maintain peace. Well said.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Kym,
This is a good melding of words and artwork about the circle of life.
We are all given gifts in life and we are always not ready for death,
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Hi Kym,
This is a good melding of words and artwork about the circle of life.
We are all given gifts in life and we are always not ready for death,
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your week
Joan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Don't mention it, Kym.
Joan
Comment from jenintorre
This poem is so profound. I really like the message you portray. I think you and I both think less is more(words) I wish you lots of luck in the 4 line poem competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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This poem is so profound. I really like the message you portray. I think you and I both think less is more(words) I wish you lots of luck in the 4 line poem competition. Jen.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Jen, for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww I was hoping for a more positive ending there and it was not to be. I'm so sorry that there is this sadness within your gift wrap but I wouldn't send it back. Without sorrow, we wouldn't know happiness. An intriguing and thought-provokingly original post! Well done and good luck in more ways than one! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Aww I was hoping for a more positive ending there and it was not to be. I'm so sorry that there is this sadness within your gift wrap but I wouldn't send it back. Without sorrow, we wouldn't know happiness. An intriguing and thought-provokingly original post! Well done and good luck in more ways than one! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
Very well written poem for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may the rest of your week be delightful. Patricia .
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Very well written poem for the contest I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may the rest of your week be delightful. Patricia .
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Oh Kahpot, such a sad poem and yet so appropriate for the present state of our world. And it could apply to a baby who has died as well. I like the thoughtful ambiguity. Makes the reader think. Well done. Best wishes for this clever entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Oh Kahpot, such a sad poem and yet so appropriate for the present state of our world. And it could apply to a baby who has died as well. I like the thoughtful ambiguity. Makes the reader think. Well done. Best wishes for this clever entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Wendy for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Got it... I think but why would you return the three to the sender whoever that may have been. Did He have a shortage? Seems, He may have. I see the Ukraine, Taiwan and of course, take your pick in the Middle East.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Got it... I think but why would you return the three to the sender whoever that may have been. Did He have a shortage? Seems, He may have. I see the Ukraine, Taiwan and of course, take your pick in the Middle East.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
