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That Talk

They'll Learn It Some Time--Some Way

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Oh gosh, haven't we all faced this moment. Wouldn't a book of the answers be a fun read? You've turned the moment into a cute flash and were saved by the bell. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your cheery comments and kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
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LOL. That's a quick and easy way of escape, passing it on to Dad. Parents really do need to prepare for - and even anticipate - the inevitable questions. A humorous and well-written story for the Flash contest. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your kind review and well wishes.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi GoWiSt, kids can say the darndest things, and they spring them on you when you least expect it. Luckily, Amy was saved by the bell, and then she passed the buck. Nice twist at the end. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments, kind review and good luck wish.
Comment from Sandollar
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Very nice choice of topic. Every parent dreads "The Talk." This was short but told a story. All the elements are there: a beginning, middle, and end. Your choice of art for the story is great. I found no errors. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your kind review and good luck wish.
Comment from nomi338
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And that my brothers, my fellow men, is what it means to be a dad. Being a dad you get stuck having to try and explain the subjects mom would most like to avoid. Heaven help you if you get it wrong and the child ultimately has to go to mom for clarification.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments and kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
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Saved by the front door. You really don't need to be blindsided by this question. It takes a bit of thought on how to answer. Who knowing what his day might say. Very cute flash. It should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments and kind review.
Comment from joann r romei
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This was very cute and could definitely have been a real conversation between a child and parent, I like the way she passed it off to her husband to answer.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Much thanks for your thoughtful comment and kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Talk about the old "Duck and cover" escape.

Nobody taught us anything when I was a kid. We all learned from dirty magazines. Ha!

Now kids seem to know everything by middle-school. Eeesh.

Good read
D

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment and kind review.
Comment from Bobby Jo
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yep, i made a deal with my husband. yousit down with our son and explain the ins and outs of a boy and ill sit down with our daughters. it works. a great bonding experience too

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks for your thoughtful comments and kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol!! Just in time, the father can tell his son all about how two cells come together and form an embryo and I'm sure no matter how many parents have tried to explain it, it was puzzling to a child. Fun story!
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Glad you got a chuckle out of this one. Thanks for your thoughtful comments, kind review and good luck wish.