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No Fast Food

No more Happy Meals

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Comment from patricia dillon
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There is really only one way to lose weight. I believe there is a drug that can induce weight loss now. But I am sceptical. I think I would rather be fat.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024


reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    Yeap!
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
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Hey, there! I had to " holler back" on the lose-weight theme! Congrats on your weight loss, unless it was a side effect from no fast food that you didn't want! I really enjoyed this clever piece and image! Very entertaining! Maddy

 Comment Written 09-May-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I like your poem. My husband lost a lot of weight when he stopped eating fast food. I try not to eat too much of it. It is so bad for us. Very good job.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from royowen
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That's probably a good thing if you've lost twenty pounds, most of us could probably need to lose a pound or two. But beautifully written my friend, good luck in He contest. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you!!
reply by royowen on 15-Apr-2024
    Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, it sounds like everything is expensive in California and this is where you get your figure back in shape too, ha ha ha, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. This is the complete truth. LOL I've been to California and you can take out a second mortgage just by going to In and Out Burger for a quick lunch! Nicely done. Good luck.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you!!
Comment from jessizero
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I got a laugh out of this 5-7-5 poem. It was cute and entertaining, and you got the syllable count correct. Maybe I should visit California. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read it!