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Dystopia to Utopia - Good Kids

Reprogramming Meditation

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Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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This beautifully written story uses such descriptive words that it resembles a poem. I love the way it flows and has a great message inside it. This makes so much sense! Good job with this!

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Many thanks for your words and attention....John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is no doubt that we are mightier when we club together as long as it is a peaceful protest and we appeal to people's emotions to change things, I enjoyed your touching words here in your personal story, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Many thanks for your words and attention....John
Comment from jim vecchio
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I do know in days past, people seemed to share more togetherness. There were pockets of similar ethnic types, but they all blended together at easily reached locations, such as the theater. When people joked about one another, it was mainly in good taste and all enjoyed a laugh. When the neighborhoods were torn down, people moved out, areas of interaction moved to malls in the outskirts of the city, people seemed to move apart from one another, understand ech other less, and their tolerance diminished.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
    Many thanks for your words and attention....John
reply by jim vecchio on 14-Apr-2024
    Thank you for posting your scholarly work.