2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a nice poem. It displays the wonders of our God. He does love ... all and everyone. He is there for all who exist, even those who don't believe in His power. There is no greater feeling than having faith. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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What a nice poem. It displays the wonders of our God. He does love ... all and everyone. He is there for all who exist, even those who don't believe in His power. There is no greater feeling than having faith. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I agree with you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
nice belief poem with smooth flow, cool imagery, and thought-provoking...
i think the last stanza should also be 4 lines (since the others are) but that could be just me lol
other than that, a good write.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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nice belief poem with smooth flow, cool imagery, and thought-provoking...
i think the last stanza should also be 4 lines (since the others are) but that could be just me lol
other than that, a good write.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, God does love us and dwells in our hearts. We just have to accept that love and follow His guidance. He will not forsake us. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Yes, God does love us and dwells in our hearts. We just have to accept that love and follow His guidance. He will not forsake us. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Nice imagery and words. As usual your colors are well depicted and not overstated. I wish you the best for your day.
Thanks for sharing. There are so many people in America that do not believe in God,
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Nice imagery and words. As usual your colors are well depicted and not overstated. I wish you the best for your day.
Thanks for sharing. There are so many people in America that do not believe in God,
RJ
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You?re welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this poem about the amazing love of Christ. I especially liked that it's His laughter that "waters barren fields."
Some suggestions:
multicolor rainbow (multicolored)
His infinite love for all
never ceases to be (be there? be for) It needs something here.
especially the most wounded
broken people
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thanks for sharing this poem about the amazing love of Christ. I especially liked that it's His laughter that "waters barren fields."
Some suggestions:
multicolor rainbow (multicolored)
His infinite love for all
never ceases to be (be there? be for) It needs something here.
especially the most wounded
broken people
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Big Sister. I corrected these errors.
I'm happy you like it. Coming from you it means a lot to me.
Love,
MariVal
Comment from royowen
As scripture reiterates, God always was, always is, and ever will be, His creation exists because He exists, everything has their/its being in Him, so you're right, it's absolute folly to think otherwise, but He will never manipulate us in His service, we must decide that ourselves, that's what truly blesses, that sentient chooses to love Him, as He loves us. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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As scripture reiterates, God always was, always is, and ever will be, His creation exists because He exists, everything has their/its being in Him, so you're right, it's absolute folly to think otherwise, but He will never manipulate us in His service, we must decide that ourselves, that's what truly blesses, that sentient chooses to love Him, as He loves us. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your feedback and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome