Work Rewards
Takes true grit to work, don't quiet.5 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think being appreciated at work means more than any pay day and I enjoyed your fine two lines for the contest Glena, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
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I think being appreciated at work means more than any pay day and I enjoyed your fine two lines for the contest Glena, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Your poem describes the photo very well, and your words seem to meet all the requirements of internal and end rhymes. Well said, good message. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Your poem describes the photo very well, and your words seem to meet all the requirements of internal and end rhymes. Well said, good message. Sending best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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You are so kind, my dear friend Wendy. I really thank you.
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your two line poem. You got the internal and ending rhymes right, and I liked that you captialized the rhyming words to emphasize them. You also made a good point. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your two line poem. You got the internal and ending rhymes right, and I liked that you captialized the rhyming words to emphasize them. You also made a good point. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, writer jessizero, for reviewing and enjoying the poem. I really appreciate it.
Comment from jim vecchio
Not only did you incorporate a great message in two small lines, but you managed to mention aq great cowboy film and novel! Great work! Remember, if you post things early on Sunday, chances are we'll have six stars left.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Not only did you incorporate a great message in two small lines, but you managed to mention aq great cowboy film and novel! Great work! Remember, if you post things early on Sunday, chances are we'll have six stars left.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you, writer friend Jim, for reviewing and encouraging my writing again.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Glena.
This is a good essence poem that describe the photo well. It is surprising that no one as asked to help this person who seems to have taken on more than he should have.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Hi Glena.
This is a good essence poem that describe the photo well. It is surprising that no one as asked to help this person who seems to have taken on more than he should have.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, writer Joan, for reviewing so kindly, and for your best wishes. I really needed this. My sister, Joan, is also a Children's book writer, and has several audio books. Joan is her middle name, not her first, but we have always called her Joan because we like that name and it is so appropriate. I do go into a university hospital about two hours from home tomorrow. I am new on here and look forward to getting back on the site and reading everyone's fine material.
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You're welcome. I hope the hospital visit is short and you have a full recovery. Hope to see you back soon.
Joan
