On Mountains Tall
Rhyming poem, inspired by sermon.15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Your photo of the mountains in Las Cruces is lovely Patricia and so is your poem about never walking alone, whether it be in mountains or valley, He is always with you. A lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Your photo of the mountains in Las Cruces is lovely Patricia and so is your poem about never walking alone, whether it be in mountains or valley, He is always with you. A lovely presentation,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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It?s with gratitude in my heart that I wish to thank you for a very nice review
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pat, I love when you write about Las Cruces because of my cherished friend who lived their. Your poem is beautifully penned. Of special note:
as He guides His wandering sheep.
(And some of His sheep wander far and wide--sometimes too far away from Him.)
Well done. Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hi Pat, I love when you write about Las Cruces because of my cherished friend who lived their. Your poem is beautifully penned. Of special note:
as He guides His wandering sheep.
(And some of His sheep wander far and wide--sometimes too far away from Him.)
Well done. Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by. Read my work and leave a nice review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I happen to be a huge fan of mountains. They always remind me of how majestic God is. I'm not that far away, I'm in Texas. Thank you for sharing this poem and this photograph with us. It's a lovely reminder of God's love for us.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I happen to be a huge fan of mountains. They always remind me of how majestic God is. I'm not that far away, I'm in Texas. Thank you for sharing this poem and this photograph with us. It's a lovely reminder of God's love for us.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate it. Patricia .
Comment from Treischel
Love the landscape image. Beautiful area. Nice abcb rhymed poem with a very good spiritual message. The last three lines didn't rhyme and made it feel incomplete to me.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Love the landscape image. Beautiful area. Nice abcb rhymed poem with a very good spiritual message. The last three lines didn't rhyme and made it feel incomplete to me.
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking your time to review my work. I will go back and see what I can do about that.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Aw, what a sweet poem inspired by a sermon. How wonderful to think of our Good Shepherd and how he looks over us even in our sleep. He'll come after us when we stray. So comforting, my friend, and I thank you for the shared devotional.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Aw, what a sweet poem inspired by a sermon. How wonderful to think of our Good Shepherd and how he looks over us even in our sleep. He'll come after us when we stray. So comforting, my friend, and I thank you for the shared devotional.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate it great
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely one, Patricia! The photo is amazing, and yes, snow covered would be very special. You are right. He is with us through every valley, and as we climb every difficult mountain.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Lovely one, Patricia! The photo is amazing, and yes, snow covered would be very special. You are right. He is with us through every valley, and as we climb every difficult mountain.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you very much for this kind review.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Those mountains look rugged and steep. I'm reminded of Psalm 23 by your poem, with our Great Shepherd caring for us. One typo: when we're (fast) asleep. I wanted a fourth line in the final stanza, but the message is good. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Those mountains look rugged and steep. I'm reminded of Psalm 23 by your poem, with our Great Shepherd caring for us. One typo: when we're (fast) asleep. I wanted a fourth line in the final stanza, but the message is good. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice comment
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You're welcome. I hope you're doing well. I'm trying to read a post or two from many, but can't read everything and still care for my husband. Have a blessed week.
Comment from judiverse
Lovely picture of the mountains. I think the large rocks look like sheep. Your poem has a lovely thought. I think you'd have a better flow by eliminating some words. In the first stanza, for instance, "on Mountains tall/ or in valleys so deep/the Lord is with us/as he cares for his sheep. You might add another line in the last stanza to balance it with the four in your other stanzas. judi
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Lovely picture of the mountains. I think the large rocks look like sheep. Your poem has a lovely thought. I think you'd have a better flow by eliminating some words. In the first stanza, for instance, "on Mountains tall/ or in valleys so deep/the Lord is with us/as he cares for his sheep. You might add another line in the last stanza to balance it with the four in your other stanzas. judi
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, wish you thank you for a very nice
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You're welcome. Have a wonderful day. judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those mountains look unusual and a bit like the surface of the moon! Your words are well chosen for this poem and I enjoyed the sentiment as we appreciate the support and guidance of our faith Patricia, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Those mountains look unusual and a bit like the surface of the moon! Your words are well chosen for this poem and I enjoyed the sentiment as we appreciate the support and guidance of our faith Patricia, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I am always grateful to get such nice comments. Thank you so.
Comment from jim vecchio
That was such a beautiful work for The Lord graced by a well-chosen image, that I hate to raise any concerns. This is just VERY small. The line just before your final line should read "fast asleep".
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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That was such a beautiful work for The Lord graced by a well-chosen image, that I hate to raise any concerns. This is just VERY small. The line just before your final line should read "fast asleep".
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your kind thoughts and nice review.
