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Seasons In Time

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winter's Last Breath "
Poems about the different seasons.

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Comment from Val Crisson
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This is not a naani. This is an extended haiku. Nanni is about human interaction. While it's lovely. It is definitely not a naani. Look up naani, which is an Indian (India) form. At least yours doesn't rhyme

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Well the rules didn't state as such, but I appreciate the information.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet,

you now have three votes.

I loved the expression :
Its icy breath

And the rhyme with death at the end.

I'm looking forward to embracing Spring!

A delightful read !

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you. I appreciate your review and kind comments. I appreciate the vote.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
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Oh this poem is great! I love the way you personify winter bringing about the death of spring. It says a lot in just a few words. Good luck in the " Naani Poetry" contest!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much. I do truly appreciate your review and kind comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am pleased to hear this positive post about winter's demise here as we all look forward to spring, a fine post for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you ever so much for your review and comments. They are most appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this was a great one. You got the syllable count and line count correct, and I liked your rhymes. I like that Spring killed Winter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you. Your review and comments always mean a lot to me.