Silent Voices
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Meddling Brook"Verses of personification
22 total reviews
Comment from LoAnn Beery
Wow...I was so surprised by the perfectly awesome way to describe this "division in the landscape". It was so perfectly said. Congratulations.I love reading a description that is pure and simple.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Wow...I was so surprised by the perfectly awesome way to describe this "division in the landscape". It was so perfectly said. Congratulations.I love reading a description that is pure and simple.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This is a great mix of words and artwork. Good use of personification of the river. We often forget how much rivers create the landscape over the years to define their coarse.
Congratulations on being the recognized writer for the month.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Hi Jessica,
This is a great mix of words and artwork. Good use of personification of the river. We often forget how much rivers create the landscape over the years to define their coarse.
Congratulations on being the recognized writer for the month.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day
Joan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Joan. I truly appreciate that! Xo
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You are most kindly welcome, Jessica.
Joan
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the first words : snaking through the rift. The picture fits the words very good. Well written great job on this .
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the first words : snaking through the rift. The picture fits the words very good. Well written great job on this .
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Mercy me, Jessica, how do you manage to still make a beautiful presentation with such little tapestry to display your words?
You are a talent, my dear! A talent! Very enjoyable. Keep up the great work!
D
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Mercy me, Jessica, how do you manage to still make a beautiful presentation with such little tapestry to display your words?
You are a talent, my dear! A talent! Very enjoyable. Keep up the great work!
D
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you a very best in the contest. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best weekend. Patricia .
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is a nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you a very best in the contest. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia! Xoxo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jess.
-A well written lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the brook,
its movement, sound, and impact.
-Good use of "snaking," as well
as alliteration in the second line.
-A very good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jess.
-A well written lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery describes the brook,
its movement, sound, and impact.
-Good use of "snaking," as well
as alliteration in the second line.
-A very good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Pam! Xo
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You are very welcome.
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Jessica!
Your Lune poem is in perfect form with proper syllable counts. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. I enjoyed your presentation.
Kim
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Hi Jessica!
Your Lune poem is in perfect form with proper syllable counts. Wishing you the best of luck in the contest. I enjoyed your presentation.
Kim
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Kim! Xo
Comment from Sally Law
This is a lovely addition to your book, and doubles as a lune poetry contest entry too. You're a smart one and so talented! A real treat in this unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and my very best wishes in the contests.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely addition to your book, and doubles as a lune poetry contest entry too. You're a smart one and so talented! A real treat in this unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and my very best wishes in the contests.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, my Sally! Xoxo
Comment from Mintybee
This 5-3-5 uses strong nouns and verbs to craft strong images. I like the picture you chose to accompany your poem. The capitalization of Brook drives home the personification as it becomes a name instead of just a noun. Brook babbles and divides, and that's just how Brook lives.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This 5-3-5 uses strong nouns and verbs to craft strong images. I like the picture you chose to accompany your poem. The capitalization of Brook drives home the personification as it becomes a name instead of just a noun. Brook babbles and divides, and that's just how Brook lives.
Mintybee
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Mintybee! Xo
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, that's what waterways are for dividing the land, many towns have been built alongside waterways, how else would these towns have water? Beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Oh yes indeed, that's what waterways are for dividing the land, many towns have been built alongside waterways, how else would these towns have water? Beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thank you, my friend!
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