Growing together
Reading, and ...7 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is very funny and I can identify with this post as kids always tell it as it is and we cannot get away with anything these days, I loved the humour here and you won my vote, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Ha ha ha, this is very funny and I can identify with this post as kids always tell it as it is and we cannot get away with anything these days, I loved the humour here and you won my vote, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
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Well, my face has been fixed (temporarily, I am sure!) - thanks so much for a super review, and for your vote. Glad the story brought a smile.
Wendy
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is good, I like it. I hope it does well in the competition. fifty words sounds like a lot but when they are put on a page they use very little space. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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That is good, I like it. I hope it does well in the competition. fifty words sounds like a lot but when they are put on a page they use very little space. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark!
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
this was really funny. There are priorities as you know. How can one concentrate on the story when something like hair on the chin is right in front of you? Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Hello Author,
this was really funny. There are priorities as you know. How can one concentrate on the story when something like hair on the chin is right in front of you? Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Tom.
Comment from jmdg1954
Kids say the darnedest things, don't they? With the innocence spoken, there's no way to get mad.
This was well written and I believe has all the requirements completed.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Kids say the darnedest things, don't they? With the innocence spoken, there's no way to get mad.
This was well written and I believe has all the requirements completed.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, John.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my! I am assuming you are a woman's which makes this so much more funny. Ha!
This was fun. Great job here and good luck in the flash contest!
D
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Oh my! I am assuming you are a woman's which makes this so much more funny. Ha!
This was fun. Great job here and good luck in the flash contest!
D
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Douglas (Yes, I'm a woman ...)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 50-word story, Growing Together, has the proper word count and shares both the stark honesty of a child and the cool use of the title in an unusual way in the tale.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This 50-word story, Growing Together, has the proper word count and shares both the stark honesty of a child and the cool use of the title in an unusual way in the tale.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Comment from Julie Helms
This is really funny. You are focused on your child's intellectual progress, and she's focused on your chin hair. A really clever flash piece that many will relate to.
Best of luck!
Julie
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This is really funny. You are focused on your child's intellectual progress, and she's focused on your chin hair. A really clever flash piece that many will relate to.
Best of luck!
Julie
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Julie.
