2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
you always amaze me with just how diverse and creative you are with the myriad of forms you brings us to immerse ourselves in.
The images you imparted within my thoughts felt so comfortable there... the imagining of two lovers lying in each other's embrace... one sleeping, one engaged in the possibility and thoughts of last night and what this morning could rekindle.
Yet another free verse Yamato Uta poem for me to froth over. (It's Australian slang usage) Frothing for it, you're excited for it. There is other more passionate descriptions, but I may have to put an warning on it!
Beautifully descriptive!
I swam within the warm currents of its ebb.
With our thoughts we create...
after-thoughts.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Hi MariVal,
you always amaze me with just how diverse and creative you are with the myriad of forms you brings us to immerse ourselves in.
The images you imparted within my thoughts felt so comfortable there... the imagining of two lovers lying in each other's embrace... one sleeping, one engaged in the possibility and thoughts of last night and what this morning could rekindle.
Yet another free verse Yamato Uta poem for me to froth over. (It's Australian slang usage) Frothing for it, you're excited for it. There is other more passionate descriptions, but I may have to put an warning on it!
Beautifully descriptive!
I swam within the warm currents of its ebb.
With our thoughts we create...
after-thoughts.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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James! good to hear from you. I forgot this poem. I went through it now and made a couple of changes.
You always know what I mean and even more... you are so insightful and kind. I appreciate your exceptional review.
I try to cover a variety of poems to keep it interesting; also, my poems reflect how I feel each day.
besitos y abrazos
MariVal
Comment from shelley kaye
"mischievous butterflies" - loved that! now i'm picturing butterflies with little devil horns LOL
a very imagistic free verse with vivid descriptions and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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"mischievous butterflies" - loved that! now i'm picturing butterflies with little devil horns LOL
a very imagistic free verse with vivid descriptions and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and whoever that guy is he's one lucky bastard. The only thing that would make it anymore perfect is if she greeted him with a cup of coffee in one hand and The Karma Sutra in the other!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and whoever that guy is he's one lucky bastard. The only thing that would make it anymore perfect is if she greeted him with a cup of coffee in one hand and The Karma Sutra in the other!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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Yes, I agree (*÷*)
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What a wonderful way to wake up!! This poem is very sensual and yet very innocent. The best way to be. The words you chose for perfect so we felt the poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
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What a wonderful way to wake up!! This poem is very sensual and yet very innocent. The best way to be. The words you chose for perfect so we felt the poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2024
Thank you very much the excellent review and kind words, .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Your words portray a wonderful image of waking up next to the one we love, and the enjoyment of that moment, beautifully written and presented, a great example of this form****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Your words portray a wonderful image of waking up next to the one we love, and the enjoyment of that moment, beautifully written and presented, a great example of this form****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Sexy and playful, warm and lovely. What a delightful STYLE of poetry as well as presentation and substance. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read!
I love that your poems are always so different from each other because you know so many formats. I always feel smarter when I finish a post of yours, Gypsy. xo
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Sexy and playful, warm and lovely. What a delightful STYLE of poetry as well as presentation and substance. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read!
I love that your poems are always so different from each other because you know so many formats. I always feel smarter when I finish a post of yours, Gypsy. xo
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure! xo