~ Little Bird ~
A 5-7-5 poem...11 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Little birds do chirp beautifully and it's such a happy sound, like all is right with the world. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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Little birds do chirp beautifully and it's such a happy sound, like all is right with the world. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
Comment from lyenochka
It's wonderful when we can enjoy the songs of birds from afar. They are praising God in their own way and it reminds us of the beauty of nature all around us. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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It's wonderful when we can enjoy the songs of birds from afar. They are praising God in their own way and it reminds us of the beauty of nature all around us. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing your nice little poem and picture combination that fit together like pieces of a puzzle. I like the short types of poems and flash fiction prose, I guess it's the new ways of life, wanting instant gratitude.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thanks for sharing your nice little poem and picture combination that fit together like pieces of a puzzle. I like the short types of poems and flash fiction prose, I guess it's the new ways of life, wanting instant gratitude.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
That beautiful little bird is really calling its mate very enthusiastically isn't it? What a delightful post! Your 5-7-5 verse fulfils the prompt and skilfully captures the essence of your image. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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That beautiful little bird is really calling its mate very enthusiastically isn't it? What a delightful post! Your 5-7-5 verse fulfils the prompt and skilfully captures the essence of your image. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much Debbie....
Comment from Gunner Lil
A wonderful poem to read this early spring.
You have chosen a great picture for your poem.
I think I saw this little guy at my bird feeder.
Your poem is an easy read with outstanding flow!
Good luck and thank you!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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A wonderful poem to read this early spring.
You have chosen a great picture for your poem.
I think I saw this little guy at my bird feeder.
Your poem is an easy read with outstanding flow!
Good luck and thank you!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from shelley kaye
lil bird, oh, lil bird,
the music you tweet are heard --
ev'ry morn we're spurred
cute little birdie 575 haiku
perfect pic - looks like the bird really is singing...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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lil bird, oh, lil bird,
the music you tweet are heard --
ev'ry morn we're spurred
cute little birdie 575 haiku
perfect pic - looks like the bird really is singing...
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Hi Shelley,
Ohh your piece is very cute as well....nicely done. Thank you so much for the amazing comment and review. I appreciate it more than you know.
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hehe 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Heidi this is such a sweet, lovely 5-7-5 poem. The artwork compliments it so nicely. There is one little issue that I know you can fix easily. There are 6 syllables in the third line. Beautifully has 4 syllables. You could choose another word or simply leave off the word "so". Beautiful poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Heidi this is such a sweet, lovely 5-7-5 poem. The artwork compliments it so nicely. There is one little issue that I know you can fix easily. There are 6 syllables in the third line. Beautifully has 4 syllables. You could choose another word or simply leave off the word "so". Beautiful poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much for the great comment and review. Shoot, you're right. I'll fix it immediately. I really appreciate that.:)
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great entry to the contest. You got the syllable count right, and the subject was lovely. I liked your use of the word "chirp." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I think this was a great entry to the contest. You got the syllable count right, and the subject was lovely. I liked your use of the word "chirp." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Hello,
Thank you so very much. I really appreciate your kindness. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your haiku beautifully captures the natural world. I thought you did a wonderful job of focusing on the simple beauty of a bird's song. In just three lines you have shared a moment of peace and tranquility. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Your haiku beautifully captures the natural world. I thought you did a wonderful job of focusing on the simple beauty of a bird's song. In just three lines you have shared a moment of peace and tranquility. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from bob cullen
I've just created the next three lines to your poem.
'Now little bird best listen an fly
The air's safe
In Hong Kong I hear.
Then again, you may prefer being a solo flyer.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I've just created the next three lines to your poem.
'Now little bird best listen an fly
The air's safe
In Hong Kong I hear.
Then again, you may prefer being a solo flyer.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Aww that's so cute!! Thank you got yhr wonderful comment and review. You made my night....a1
