~ Shoe Stew ~
A not very nice dinner....8 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it's definitely funny and entertaining, but I have to admit it certainly doesn't make your son-in-law's cooking sound very appetizing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Well, it's definitely funny and entertaining, but I have to admit it certainly doesn't make your son-in-law's cooking sound very appetizing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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His cooking kind of stinks lol.....thank you so very much!!
Comment from Elizabeth Maguire
Smart and quick rhymes and interesting topic. I enjoyed reading about Shoe Stew. I would not have thought of that. Good descriptive lines that bring about pictures and tastes. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Smart and quick rhymes and interesting topic. I enjoyed reading about Shoe Stew. I would not have thought of that. Good descriptive lines that bring about pictures and tastes. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much....
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think I could eat undercooked carrots, but undercooked potatoes sound awful. We have to learn the hard way with cooking, but learn we do if we want to eat good food, I enjoyed your fun post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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I think I could eat undercooked carrots, but undercooked potatoes sound awful. We have to learn the hard way with cooking, but learn we do if we want to eat good food, I enjoyed your fun post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Dolly
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great entry for the "not funny but funny" writing prompt. I laughed at the story the poem told, and I liked your rhymes. I hope I never have to try "shoe stew." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I think this was a great entry for the "not funny but funny" writing prompt. I laughed at the story the poem told, and I liked your rhymes. I hope I never have to try "shoe stew." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Trust me....Shoe Stew is nasty!! Thank you so much Jessi for your awesome comment and review. :)
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Not Funny but Funny writing prompt. This poem gave me a chuckle along with stomach distress. :-) Definitely keep that man out of your kitchen for the health and safety of all involved. Nicely done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Not Funny but Funny writing prompt. This poem gave me a chuckle along with stomach distress. :-) Definitely keep that man out of your kitchen for the health and safety of all involved. Nicely done. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Hello friend,
It's honestly a true story too!! Lol thank you so much for the amazing comment and review. You're awesome....
Comment from Julie Helms
Haha, funny, yet truly unappetizing sounding. He gets points for trying, though. Well-done poem with original quirky title.
One suggestion for a fix:
He's afraid to cook it to long (too long)
Thanks for sharing! Julie :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Haha, funny, yet truly unappetizing sounding. He gets points for trying, though. Well-done poem with original quirky title.
One suggestion for a fix:
He's afraid to cook it to long (too long)
Thanks for sharing! Julie :-)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Hello Julie,
Thank you so very much for the amazing comment and review. I really appreciate it. Also, thank you for the suggestion. I'll fix it immediately :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is so funny! Your poem about your son-in-law's cooking is both entertaining and, I'm afraid, just a little too relatable! The playful rhymes and witty descriptions paint a vivid picture of the disaster unfolding in the kitchen. haha. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is so funny! Your poem about your son-in-law's cooking is both entertaining and, I'm afraid, just a little too relatable! The playful rhymes and witty descriptions paint a vivid picture of the disaster unfolding in the kitchen. haha. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much!! Sadly, this is very true lol what a mess..thank you for the awesome comment and review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem reminds me of the old folk tale "Stone Soup." Boy, but if it's based on a real event, someone in your family would need cooking lessons from scratch. Undercooked carrots definitely make soup less appealing. My mom said to always put those carrots in first, ha ha.
No wonder you end the poem: Dinner's been officially derailed
Suggestion: I would put an exclamation mark after 'derailed' in that last line.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This poem reminds me of the old folk tale "Stone Soup." Boy, but if it's based on a real event, someone in your family would need cooking lessons from scratch. Undercooked carrots definitely make soup less appealing. My mom said to always put those carrots in first, ha ha.
No wonder you end the poem: Dinner's been officially derailed
Suggestion: I would put an exclamation mark after 'derailed' in that last line.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much!! That dinner was horrible lol thank you for the wonderful comment and review. I truly appreciate it more than you know. Exclamation mark coming right up. Thanks for the suggestion.
