Shy One
This was me.27 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
So many struggle with shyness, which once included me. And it isn't something that is easy to overcome. In truth, many lack confidence, even those who seem confident and outgoing. They've just learned to push shy aside for the sake of self. We all have something to offer. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
So many struggle with shyness, which once included me. And it isn't something that is easy to overcome. In truth, many lack confidence, even those who seem confident and outgoing. They've just learned to push shy aside for the sake of self. We all have something to offer. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much for the nice review Ric! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Sally Law
Jodi Ann, it's hard to believe you were ever this shy and introverted. You're so sweet and welcoming in your reviews and comments. You're quite transformed. I'm really glad you found FanStory too. Thank you so much for sharing your brave post and true story.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Xos
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
Jodi Ann, it's hard to believe you were ever this shy and introverted. You're so sweet and welcoming in your reviews and comments. You're quite transformed. I'm really glad you found FanStory too. Thank you so much for sharing your brave post and true story.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally Xos
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Yes, I can?t believe how shy I was either. I had my few close friends, but that was it. I made myself break out of this. Thanks for such a kind review!xoxo
Comment from Boogienights
A very accurate description of shyness. I was painfully shy in school and the bullies picked up on it. I got beat up a lot by a gang of girls.l'm sorry for what you are still going through. A powerful piece.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
A very accurate description of shyness. I was painfully shy in school and the bullies picked up on it. I got beat up a lot by a gang of girls.l'm sorry for what you are still going through. A powerful piece.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I broke out when I got to college. In high school I was the nonexistent one, so I rarely got picked on. Thanks also for the nice review!
Comment from locust
Insightful and self-aware poetry is my favorite kind. I'm glad you learned how to be more comfortable and were able to break free of your fear. Shyness is not an easy thing to overcome. The very thing can help us (the support of others) is the one thing we're too afraid to ask for.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
Insightful and self-aware poetry is my favorite kind. I'm glad you learned how to be more comfortable and were able to break free of your fear. Shyness is not an easy thing to overcome. The very thing can help us (the support of others) is the one thing we're too afraid to ask for.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the great review! Yes, just out of high school I was determined to break out of this and did. I realized the world is not so scary.
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is the kind of poetry that is bound to resonate with its readers because it evokes such empathy -- many will relate. Very well done. I love the picture you chose too -- but I have a hard time imaging anyone so lovely being so shy!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
This is the kind of poetry that is bound to resonate with its readers because it evokes such empathy -- many will relate. Very well done. I love the picture you chose too -- but I have a hard time imaging anyone so lovely being so shy!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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All of this happened when I was in elementary school. I made myself break out of this when I was in college. Thanks for the kind words and review Dawn!
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You are very welcome. :)
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a powerful and moving poem about struggling with severe social anxiety and shyness all your life. I like the references to the social insecurity of facing going to a prom
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
a powerful and moving poem about struggling with severe social anxiety and shyness all your life. I like the references to the social insecurity of facing going to a prom
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thanks for the kind words Jake! I have since broken out. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Colorado Owl
It's painful to read this, imagining how difficult life can be for someone like this. I hope it's last line in true, and you were able overcome this huge obstacle. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
It's painful to read this, imagining how difficult life can be for someone like this. I hope it's last line in true, and you were able overcome this huge obstacle. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thanks again Colorado Owl! I did end up breaking out of this in college. I made myself.
Comment from Dr. Nad
I want to complement you on this excellent piece of work that reflects not only the shyness you experienced, but the lifelong condition experienced by many. We catch the tone of angst in this compilation and it is truly difficult. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
I want to complement you on this excellent piece of work that reflects not only the shyness you experienced, but the lifelong condition experienced by many. We catch the tone of angst in this compilation and it is truly difficult. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for this review! I broke out of this, after high school. I made myself. Thanks again!
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You are most welcome.
I'm glad ya broke out!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I can relate to much of this, Jodi as I am sure many readers will. An emotional write and you've expressed these feelings well especially about breaking out of the silent prison. Keep on digging,
Cheers
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
I can relate to much of this, Jodi as I am sure many readers will. An emotional write and you've expressed these feelings well especially about breaking out of the silent prison. Keep on digging,
Cheers
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Oh my gosh! I want to cry! Thanks for the six star review! You made my day!
Comment from Jim Wile
This was a very interesting poem that highlights the dilemma of many shy introverts. So what was it that broke you out of your silent prison? Was it writing poetry?
I think many writers find that they express themselves best through the written word. Writing well requires you to think clearly about what you are saying and choose words carefully to convey your meaning. It's a more disciplined way of communicating. I, for one, find it much preferable to speaking off the cuff. It gives us shy ones a better chance to communicate. As obsessions go (from your bio), this is a great one! - Jim
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
This was a very interesting poem that highlights the dilemma of many shy introverts. So what was it that broke you out of your silent prison? Was it writing poetry?
I think many writers find that they express themselves best through the written word. Writing well requires you to think clearly about what you are saying and choose words carefully to convey your meaning. It's a more disciplined way of communicating. I, for one, find it much preferable to speaking off the cuff. It gives us shy ones a better chance to communicate. As obsessions go (from your bio), this is a great one! - Jim
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I made myself break out of this shyness, once I left high school. Everything in the poem was true for me as a young child. I actually didn?t start writing poems until recently. Thanks for the great review!
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Good for you, Jodi. I didn't start writing fiction until I was 65 years old. It's never too late to try something new. Now writing a novel gives me the most pleasure of any of my daily activities.