Rather Serious
A 5-7-5-7-7 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again, Mark, so much packed into so little! You tell a story that might, elsewhere, consume pages and all so beautifully presented with your period image. Romantic and yet infused with danger! Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Once again, Mark, so much packed into so little! You tell a story that might, elsewhere, consume pages and all so beautifully presented with your period image. Romantic and yet infused with danger! Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka-form, Rather Serious, has the proper formatting, and notes the beginning of a crack in a relationship that finds the lover becoming the mover.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This tanka-form, Rather Serious, has the proper formatting, and notes the beginning of a crack in a relationship that finds the lover becoming the mover.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
