The Bully
A bully gets hurt.7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Cosmic,
It sound like the x-ray technician was as much as a bully as the injured bully.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Hi Cosmic,
It sound like the x-ray technician was as much as a bully as the injured bully.
This should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Keep writing and stay healthly
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your feedback.
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No problem, Cosmic.
Joan
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The Bully is a poem that makes you think. Writing a description for each of these words is complicated. The bully gets hurt and perhaps ends up in the hospital.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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The Bully is a poem that makes you think. Writing a description for each of these words is complicated. The bully gets hurt and perhaps ends up in the hospital.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your feedback.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, bullies are quite often those who have been bullied themselves by a violent father, or mother, but they in turn can be in danger, some will fight back, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Oh yes, bullies are quite often those who have been bullied themselves by a violent father, or mother, but they in turn can be in danger, some will fight back, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I really had fun writing this type of poem.
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Well done
Comment from locust
These types of poems are always a challenge for me so I love seeing what people cleverer than me can come up with! You managed not only to follow the rules but tell an interesting story too. Nice job!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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These types of poems are always a challenge for me so I love seeing what people cleverer than me can come up with! You managed not only to follow the rules but tell an interesting story too. Nice job!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you. I enjoyed the challenge of writing outside of my comfort zone.
Comment from jessizero
This poem actually made sense rather than just being a random collection of words, so great job! I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This poem actually made sense rather than just being a random collection of words, so great job! I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. I enjoyed the challenge of writing this poem.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is an excellent entry for the Alliteration Body Count #2 Contest. The criteria for the piece was met. This read very smoothly and made sense in its storyline which isn't easy to do alphabetically with only one word per line! Very good job. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the Alliteration Body Count #2 Contest. The criteria for the piece was met. This read very smoothly and made sense in its storyline which isn't easy to do alphabetically with only one word per line! Very good job. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear anonymous! However i don't think buĺlies should be hurt. I believe that there is a reason behind any bullying. There should be more dialogue between children, their parents and the school.
However thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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This is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear anonymous! However i don't think buĺlies should be hurt. I believe that there is a reason behind any bullying. There should be more dialogue between children, their parents and the school.
However thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your feedback and for sharing your opinion about bullying.
