Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

well-written poem about passion and being on fire
the image is very penetrating to the heart, causing a mixture of feelings
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet, you now have 8 votes.

Best of the lot in my opinion..I like how you use landscape terms to describe the body parts.

I also loved how you wrapped up your poem about love being the key to an everlasting relationship.

I did my part,

Best of luck !

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024

Thank you for this nice review and your vote....l appreciate both very much. :)

Comment from Jessica Wheeler

Exceptional

Oh, I just loved this! What a beautiful poem filled with romance. Its subtle sensuality is delivered with just enough steam. The rhythm is smooth, and the rhyme is spot on. Exceptional work!
Xo
Jess

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thank you for this fantastic exceptional review...it means a lot to me. :)

Comment from Nathan Allen

Exceptional

Very expressive with a good use of both verb and adjective to keep the reader engaged as they too go along with the journey of both life love and sensation.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024

Thank you for the 6 shining stars! It's appreciated more than you know. :)

Comment from cupa tea

Exceptional

This is really good! I love the image you put with the poem and the poem does just as it's suppose to do. Your choice of words is fantastic!
Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the six stars! It's so appreciated and made my night! :)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it. It almost has the feel of the passion that was taking place in the song of Solomon in the Bible. If you've never read this song of Solomon, you might want to pick up the Bible and read it because That writing Ashley very much describes love between two people. Patricia .

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Thank you so much. I own a bible and have read it, but l will revisit that part. Thanks again.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I loved your rhymes! I think this was the perfect entry for the "passionate love" prompt. It is sensual without being vulgar. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024

Thsnk you, l appreciate this teriffic review. :)