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The Dispatchers

acrostic for 911 operators

9 total reviews 
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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These are certainly hard to do. I have done a couple myself. I like doing these odd ones. I may get a headache from doing them, but I also get a sense of accomplishment. Good work. Karen

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Karen, thanks for your nice comments and personal sentiments. teafor2
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 22-Mar-2024
    :-)
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    :)
Comment from Mark Jackson
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That's good, I like it. Not someone we think about a lot but without them we would not have an emergency service. Made me think about the role and made me read twice.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    Mark, thanks for your honest comments and personal sentiments. teafor2
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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I love the artwork by Corrinas creations. It is sweet and a gentle reminder of the necessity for dispatchers when you dial 911 to cover all the bases and get you the help that you need.
This acrostic is a great way to tell the tale of how they come to our rescue.
Thanks for sharing your talent for acrostic-styled poetry.
Jesse

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
    Jesse, thanks for your thoughtful comments and shared sentiments.
    Your support and rating appreciated. teafor2
reply by Jesse James Doty on 21-Mar-2024
    You're welcome, T.
    Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
    :)
Comment from patcelaw
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I have very serious eye conditions. Therefore, I am unable to read your message in your poem. If you would darken the background too, maybe a slate gray rather than the lighter gray I might be able to read it, but with the white lettering on the background that you have now I cannot read it. Patricia.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    patcelaw, thanks for your honest comments...Your response and sentiments are highly respected. teafor2
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was well done. You do a wonderful job in sharing the need to help and support others. Your acrostic is so creatively written with each word fitting perfectly. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Michael, thanks for your laudatory comments, personal sentiments
    and generous rating. teafor2
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Yes, these people who answer distress calls could be dealing with anything. A fine tribute to their work.

A couple of suggestions:

Perhaps (thought) should be (thoughtful)

Spelling edit here:
(Expeditiously)

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Dolly, thanks for your shared comments and suggestions...They are
    being considered as I write. teafor2
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent Acrostic poem for unsung heroes. I have known dispatchers and it is a stressful, emotional, difficult job. You did a good job covering the spectrum of their job in your poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Marilyn, thanks for your personal comments, shared sentiments and
    generous rating. teafor2
Comment from royowen
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I think this was a contest at some stage, acrostics had sentences after each letter, at some stage, a very interesting acrostic, there's a few spelling errors, well done, blessings Roy
1: Helph?
2: (expidistiously) expeditiously?
3 : (hendered) hindered?

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Roy, thanks for your nice comments, personal sentiments and eagle
    eye catches of a slew of spelling errors. teafor2
reply by royowen on 19-Mar-2024
    Most welcome
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    :)teafor2
Comment from kahpot
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So very clever and weel done, if I may, " your second line "Helph" might need some editing, this is excellent, to create an Acrostic with one-word lines is a marvelous feat, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    kahpot, thanks for your nice comments, personal sentiments and eagle eye catch of the spelling error. teafor2