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Death at the Waterhole

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Comment from zanya
Excellent
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Yes - a great entry for the Write a Modern Fable, as the fable emerges definitively as the narration proceeds and a tale for our times and our attitude to 'life's essential resources.'

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
    Many thanks, Zanya.
Comment from Consul22
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I enjoyed this fable very much. You kept me guessing about the ending after introducing the rhino and the elephant. You also certainly wrote a modern fable.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Very generous. Many thanks. Cheers, Terry.
Comment from royowen
Excellent
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I don't think that anything we say and will make any differences to the world's resources any, renewable energy is too far in the future, and way too expensive. meanwhile coal is the only cost efficient way. Nuclear seems to be the answer, but risky. We've become luxury motivated. Expediency seems to be what we're good at, but well done, great analogy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Roy. Reciprocated.
reply by royowen on 17-Mar-2024
    Well done