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April Fool Joke

Sometimes pranks can lead to unintended consquences.

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Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Hahaha. I bet that happens a LOT on April Fools' Day - the fooler becomes the fool! I even wonder if it's more the rule than the exception. At any rate, this is funny and was very fun to read. Good luck in the contest! xo

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Appreciated. xoo
reply by Rachelle Allen on 30-Mar-2024
    My pleasure!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This poem humorously depicts a classic April Fool's prank gone south! This was so funny. I enjoyed the storytelling in your poem. Nice use of dialogue too! Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks much for taking the time to read and provide encouraging feedback...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You energised the teacher here with your new coffee blend and I enjoyed the moral in this cute story. April fool's day is on its way, a fun, well written poem full of humour, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks for your read and encouraging input. x