Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

sweet and hopeful gogyohka
that top pic does kinda look like sunny fingers wrapping around clouds...
i like the fertile rain line - nice wording.

thank you for sharing this innocent poem
shelley :)

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh, the metaphors on life in this poem. This is very far from a simple poem, most of yours are not simple. I think as I dissect the words, this poem is very complex. Wonderful job.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how the sun has "pink fingers" and both the sun and rain work together to bring life to the fertile ground and that seems to lead into the hopeful fertility of a couple awaiting a child.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, big sister, yes, you got it.

Love,

Marival

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

The Sun is actually a very new star causing extreme heat to keep Earth warm during the daylight hours.
The Sun's fingers...
The Pink Clouds...
Both imaginative as impressive adding to your gogyohka.
Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful evening.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024

Thank you very much, doctor Ricky.

Gypsy hugs