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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The love and passion come through this poem perfectly. I could feel it as I read. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us. It is one of your best.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. 😊

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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aw nice little love notes to each other... hopefully they're not affairs lol
cool somonkas with great imagery and smooth flow - love the pic, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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I love this form, and reading this has inspired me to try another one,
in remembrance of last night
I daydreamed all-day what excellent lines these are, they are my favorite, beautifully written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, kym. 😊

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
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Mmm. Sensual and romantic! With your trademark brilliant presentation!
Love the dual statement/reply...

I could have guessed which was the male's!

(smile)

Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much, Sister, I love tanka poems... the originals from the Japanese Imperial Court are very passionate.
reply by karenina on 12-Mar-2024
    Ssssssizzling!

    ;)
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-written Somonka poem. I believe this is the first time I have had the opportunity to review such a poem. Good desire between two lovers who wants to be with each other. Nice picture too.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Ideally that's how it is with a loving couple. But sometimes as we age, the "fire" can die down and it's hard to spark. Yet the love is still warm and caring even without being turned on.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
    yes, I know love changes through time and passion changes into a more gentle love. You and your husband are lucky.

    Love you, big sis,

    MariVal