Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Living On The Edge - Chap 14"The blending of good and evil.
19 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What the.. .just happened the victim gets blamed for the death of the prey, and the only one who knows the true is down. Thank you for sharing and keeping us on our toes.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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What the.. .just happened the victim gets blamed for the death of the prey, and the only one who knows the true is down. Thank you for sharing and keeping us on our toes.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Hello Iza...I'm thrilled to see you back and have read the last two chapters until I post again. Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Wow that all went very wrong. But what will happen now. She's caught and arrested, she's stabbed a police officer and Jake might be dead. Can it get any worse? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Wow that all went very wrong. But what will happen now. She's caught and arrested, she's stabbed a police officer and Jake might be dead. Can it get any worse? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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The calvary is on it's way...in so many unexpected forms. Thanks for reading, Ulla. I'm glad yu are enjoying the story. It's about to wrap up. Can't believe it. In less than two weeks I've written over 33,000 so far...best part of it is people enjoyed the story.
Smiles, Carol
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It's amazing. I hope it will do well in the contest. Hugs xc
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Me too! It was a fun write....especially since so many enjoyed it.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Good grief herbert! This is all tangled up. You have really stirred up the pot. I did not get this one in my box. You might wanna check with Tom, or see if anyone else missed getting it. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Good grief herbert! This is all tangled up. You have really stirred up the pot. I did not get this one in my box. You might wanna check with Tom, or see if anyone else missed getting it. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 14-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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I've been getting reviews and have posted chapter 15. Let me know if you don't get that one. Thanks so much as always.
Smiles, Carol
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I will read it. I got it in my box.
Good writing. Karen
Comment from Terry Broxson
Carol, looks like you need to weed out a couple of characters. The plot does thicken. I'm not sure Jake is dead, we may need him later on. Tommy will not be missed. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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Carol, looks like you need to weed out a couple of characters. The plot does thicken. I'm not sure Jake is dead, we may need him later on. Tommy will not be missed. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
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I'm doing the best I can, but they just won't die! LOL We're getting closer though. Thanks for the review. And for your kind words, of course.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Wow, there was some action here, with three men down, but Layla isn't one of them, and Jake has copped two bullets for his trouble, and Layla is still standing, plenty of action in this episode, but our crooked police chief is still alive and kicking, well done Carol, , blessings Roy
Typo,stranger(')s type.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Wow, there was some action here, with three men down, but Layla isn't one of them, and Jake has copped two bullets for his trouble, and Layla is still standing, plenty of action in this episode, but our crooked police chief is still alive and kicking, well done Carol, , blessings Roy
Typo,stranger(')s type.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Fixed and appreciated.
Thanks for stopping by and reading another chapter. I greatly appreciate your time and the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Most welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written chapter. It is full of great suspense and had me sitting on the edge of my seat as I read it. Great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is a very well written chapter. It is full of great suspense and had me sitting on the edge of my seat as I read it. Great descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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You are so kind, Teri. I truly appreciate your reading and reviewing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
The story is moving along very smoothly, and I am enjoying listening to it. I wish you the very best with the rest of the story, and I am sure that I will enjoy listening to those as well. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Pat.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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The story is moving along very smoothly, and I am enjoying listening to it. I wish you the very best with the rest of the story, and I am sure that I will enjoy listening to those as well. May you have a wonderful day, and God bless. Pat.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your kin words.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
You build tension better than anyone I know, and even those who write books that I don't know. I expected Jake to stick around a little longer, so maybe he isn't dead. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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You build tension better than anyone I know, and even those who write books that I don't know. I expected Jake to stick around a little longer, so maybe he isn't dead. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Probably because the "matter" inside the large marble atop my shoulders is wound as tight as a spring...waiting to explode. Ugh! What a gory sight that would be. I am glad you appreciated the chapter and thank you for the kind review.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Jake has to pull through! Layla, well she might be safer in acell for the moment. Richard is as corrupt as they come, and there'll be a few who get taken down with him when the time comes. What a story! You are juggling a lot of balls here! Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Jake has to pull through! Layla, well she might be safer in acell for the moment. Richard is as corrupt as they come, and there'll be a few who get taken down with him when the time comes. What a story! You are juggling a lot of balls here! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Hope Jake had some backup somewhere and he didn't go it alone. And who snatched Marcos and threw him in the trunk??? Convenient that the reporters were there so quickly so Richard could take certain stage. He's about to make an itsy teenie mistake....and he just might regret it!
Thanks for the review and the stars. I appreciate it so much.
Hugs and smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Thank goodness I had a six remaining! I thought I was out...
This deserves nothing less!
Is it too much to hope Jake survives?
I'm so invested in your tale I nearly fell out of my chair!
Oh, I can't wait for Richard to get HIS!
You must begin submitting this for publication!
Seriously quit top notch!
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"Something spicey, maybe."
(spicy)
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"Acting like one of Humphrey Bogart's dames."
(incomplete sentence)
You are on fire!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank goodness I had a six remaining! I thought I was out...
This deserves nothing less!
Is it too much to hope Jake survives?
I'm so invested in your tale I nearly fell out of my chair!
Oh, I can't wait for Richard to get HIS!
You must begin submitting this for publication!
Seriously quit top notch!
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"Something spicey, maybe."
(spicy)
*
"Acting like one of Humphrey Bogart's dames."
(incomplete sentence)
You are on fire!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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My son has been telling me the same thing when I tell him every night about my reviews. He's so wrapped up in his movies and I can't help as much, but I do like to share a little with him. I think I will need to add more description or other scenes if I do publish it as a novel. It doesn't have enough words. Or maybe I publish as is just for myself.
Glad you enjoyed it. I couldn't wait to hear your reaction.
Thank you as always....Smiles, hugs and love, Carol
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A buddy told me you were adding to the first chapters...
I'm going to start looking for places for you to submit for publication!
