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Imagination

Imagination's pathway

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, Imagination is very crucial in our lives and for hope. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
    Hi Barbara, I'm so glad you enjoyed my Imagination acrostic! Thank you for the great review! :o) Helvi
Comment from teafor2
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Helvi2, I personally put "imagination" right up there with "free will." The acrostic form is always a challenge due to the artist/author is limited to the words/phrases/titles/topics/subjects, etc...And please somebody him or her if/when they come 'across' the "Y" or "Z" letter. Your piece of creation flows down the page smoothly relating what could be the story
of contributing to a "site" like Fanstory...Some alliterations: F's, far from;
D's, dreamscapes dress; W's, world with...Rhymes: internal, swirls/twirls;
end, site/insight; soul/goal. Well done. Good luck in the contest.teafor2





 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Hi Teafor 2, Once upon a time on here I did
    Supercalifragalistcexpialdocious as an acrostic. It took me about 4 years to do though. I was determined that somehow I was going to get it written. Didn't know if I would make it or not! Whew! It's fun trying to write this type of poem. I'm glad you liked the words I wrote here. Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Jewell McChesney
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I am so happy to see poetry here from you. What a fabulous verse describing the imagination. Great verbiage, my friend. The image is as wonderful as your well written words.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2024
    Hi My Friend! I'm happy to see that you're here! I drop by now and then to write something. Thank you so much for the super wonderful review! I am honored! :o) Nancy
Comment from Teri7
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Helvi, This is a very well written and well worded Acrostic poem you have penned. The imagery you created is so lovely and goes so well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Bless you Terry and thank you for the extraordinary review! I am on cloud 9! :o) Helvi
reply by Teri7 on 10-Mar-2024
    You are so welcome sweet friend! I love your work! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a clever and imaginative post penned with skill and this is the best entry I have read for the contest so far and I reckon this could be a winner. Love the flow and well chosen words. I felt the mind being freed of all restriction here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Oh My Goodness! Thank you Dolly! You made my day saying my acrostic was the best you read so far! Thank you so much! I hope I do have a chance at winning! :o) Nancy
Comment from Esther Brown
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That is great. You are so right, imagination is a worthy tool. You are obviously in your element and gifted.
Manipulation is misspelled I think? I have edited a lot of policy and procedure manuals in my life. The first one I spelled proceedure wrong all the way through. Easy fix.
Your name suggests you are not generic American. I know what you mean about ideas bouncing. Fun thing to have people to share with and appreciate them.
Esther

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Hi Esther, Double checked the spelling of "manipulation" and I got it right! Thanks for pointing it out though! Sometimes in the hurry of posting the fingers slip and you make a mistake. ..... My mother's grandparents came from Finland so I am half Finnish. Helvi was my mom's middle name and I use it in honor of her. Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi aka Nancy
reply by Esther Brown on 10-Mar-2024
    My mom was Finnish first generation in USA.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    My Mom was first generation in the states too! MY grandparents both came seperately to the states and met in this country. How cool is that that we have something in common! :o) Nancy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A very nice entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest. An imaginative description of imagination! Nice flow. Vivid imagery. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Thanks Marilyn! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my imagination Acrostic! :o) Helvi
Comment from Gunner Lil
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This is an easy read poem.
You used a great picture also.
Liked haw you used each letter of IMAGINATION.
The poem has a good flow and pace.
Thank you!



 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Hi Gunner Lil, Glad you thought this was an easy read and enjoyed it! Thank you for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a beautiful acrostic! The poem tells a good story and the picture is stunning.
One typo for you:
Allowing muses to adorn their world with new incite (insight)

Best of luck! Julie

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Hi Julie, Thank you for the lovely review and pointing out my mistake, both were much appreciated! :o) Helvi
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is an excellent acrostic poem for the challenge. It is full of good imagery and colorful descriptions. The photo image supports your words well. Just one note below:

Typo in the description:
Imaginations ('s)

Best wishes,

Alex



 Comment Written 10-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
    Hi Alexandra, Thanks for pointing out my mistake and for the great review. So Glad you enjoyed my acrostic! :o) Helvi
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 10-Mar-2024
    Oh, you're welcome, Helvi. Others help me, too. :) Alex